雅思范文：警察是否应该带枪
<P>雅思范文：警察是否应该带枪</P><P>Unlike other countries, police in UK do not carry guns. Some think it leaves citizen unprotected, others think it reduce the overall violence in the society. Please discuss. <br><br> At the mention of a policeman, most people will have in their mind the image of a strong man or woman with a gun on his belt. But it is not the case in UK: police there do not carry guns. People’s opinions towards this vary. <br><br> Some people think this contributes to the decrease of violence in society. For one thing, when a robber sees a policeman pointing a gun at him, he may get exasperated and desperate and, out of despair, he may hurt people around him. If the policeman does not carry a gun, nothing of the kind will happen. For another, to err is human and no one can guarantee that a policeman does not mis-shoot the pedestrians when he is hurriedly chasing a criminal. Lastly, some policemen have committed 123ious crimes with the guns they had. <br><br> However, other people hold different views: police without guns leave citizens unprotected. To begin with, at critical moments, guns in policemen’s hands can be essential in fighting against the criminals. Imagine a bank robber pointing a gun at the head of a hostage. A policeman can hardly do anything about it if he does not carry a gun. However, the situation can be totally reversed otherwise. Moreover, policemen are well-trained and thus rarely hurt innocent people with their guns. <br><br> As far as I am concerned, the latter is more favorable. To my mind, policemen are the very few people on earth who should carry guns, with which they can effectively protect the citizens. (283 words) <br></P>
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<P>please discuss 的意思就是说应当两种观点都进行一下论述，然后再提出自己的观点么？ 是否重点应当放在自己的观点上呢？ 给我的感觉，这篇文章的没有着重论述自己的观点，这样恰当么? </P> <P>3楼的兄弟很对，discuss 的意思就是说应当两种观点都进行一下论述，然后再提出自己的观点。但重点讨论的应该是题目提出来的观点，自己的观点没有必要去论述，而是通过讨论水到渠成达到的，就如这篇范文一样。另外文章的语言也是一个亮点，烤鸭们应该勤于练习，找专人批改以便最大程度的提高。同时环球雅思学术写作中心也提供专业的雅思作文写作和批改服务， 欢迎来电咨询：8802 6161转 32</P><br>
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