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<P ><FONT face="Times New Roman">Intelligent machines such as robots are widely applied to take the place of human beings. Please discuss the advantages and disadv.</FONT></P><P ><p><FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT></p></P>
<P ><FONT face="Times New Roman">As we can see, no invention has received more praise and abuse than intelligent robots. There is a general debate in the current society over the phenomenon of intelligent machines replacing human beings. As for me, people could not deny the fact that robots could not only create a growing amount of values for the mankind, but undoubtedly produce some unfavorable effects to us.</FONT></P>
<P ><FONT face="Times New Roman">In the first place, intelligent robots, which play a significant role in the technical industry, have innumerable preferences. In contrast with the man labors, they can do more efficient and accurate jobs without human factors such as exhausting, annoying, or even complaints. No matter how busy they are, the diligent robots work like a cow in accordance with their working procedures.</FONT></P>
<P ><FONT face="Times New Roman">Moreover, it is widely acknowledged that they can do some dangerous jobs, or some jobs which can not be carried out by human beings. I never hear the news that a person could do any jobs with previous experiments with the usage of intelligent machines in the outer space, nor could I imagine a doctor implement an operation inside human’s body. As long as there are risks in the course of experiment or work, people always utilize the intelligent machines to do them the favor.</FONT></P>
<P ><FONT face="Times New Roman">Yet the robots admittedly have their weakness and fragile points. They could only follow the orders or procedures which is made by programmer, and can not correct any mistakes by themselves. Furthermore, if there is something wrong with their electrical circuits, they will become good-for-nothing machines.</FONT></P>
<P ><FONT face="Times New Roman">Consequently, judging from above-mentioned commentaries, we may subjectively draw a conclusion that human could not be under control by a robot which has no own thought. Provided people make use of the advantages of intelligent machines, we can do the job more and more effectively. </FONT></P>
得7分的文章首先要做到的一点就是不能模式化,而本篇文章就是一篇典型的模式化文章,开头和结尾的套路事实上已经被千万个烤鸭们历练过了，不过本篇文章的语言及内容确实已经达到了7分水平,只要将你的开头，结尾尤其是开头写出一个与众不同，考官不会在7分上为难你的。
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