请问老师TASK1这么写能得7分吗?
<P >剑一第三套<FONT face="Times New Roman">task 1</FONT></P><P ><p><FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT></p></P>
<P ><FONT face="Times New Roman">As can be seen, the bar graph and curve chart illustrate the fast food consumption In Britain over the past decades. </FONT></P>
<P ><FONT face="Times New Roman">In the bar graph, it is significant to show that the British people with high income spend 40pence per person per week on Hamburgers, which is the highest expense compared to people with average income and low income, and spend twice as much as they buy Fish & Chips or Pizza as well. In the average income group, people still spend most on Hamburgers and least on Pizza. As for the low income group, the average expense is below 20 pence per person per week, with the highest expense (18 pence) on Fish & Chips, medium cost (14 pence) on Hamburgers, and lowest (8 pence) on Pizza.</FONT></P>
<P ><FONT face="Times New Roman">In the curve chart, in contrast with the Hamburgers and Pizza which are all under 100 grammes in 1970s, Fish & Chips had overwhelmingly superiority with consumption of 300 grammes, while it experienced a bit fluctuation within the range from 300 to 200 grammes until 1990s. However, during the years from 1970s to 1990s, the consumption of both Hamburgers and Pizza tended to climb, with the difference of dramatically increase in Hamburgers and slightly progress in Pizza.</FONT></P> <P><STRONG><FONT face=Verdana color=#61b713>俞扬, 你好, 跟你做完写作辅导，相信你知道怎么去写这类文章了吧, 继续努力写哦，等你的好消息。</FONT></STRONG></P> <STRONG><FONT face=Verdana color=#61b713>俞扬, 你好, 你的文章写的还不错哦，上次跟你做辅导时讲的就是这篇文章吧,这里就不细谈了哦。有问题给我打电话。</FONT></STRONG>
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