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房挺 发表于 2005-11-1 22:51

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<P><STRONG><EM>Some people say that the increasing business and cultural contact between countries is a positive development, while others think that many countries will lose their national identities. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.</EM></STRONG></P>
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<P>The world today is characterized by the free flow of information and commodity. The frequent interaction and growing interdependence among countries have ended the days of regional isolation and absolute national sovereignty, but they have also sparked off sharp controversies over the positive and negative impacts that a global culture can bring into our life.</P>
<P>Some people say that the widening international exchanges, both in the field of business and culture, have exerted positive influences to a nation as well as its people. To begin with, they promote business cooperation among nations. For example, large multinational companies spread the latest technologies and experience around the world, and international trade has helped so many less developed economies grow. Also, they enrich people’s lives because people of one nation are given opportunities through international tourism, exhibitions and fairs, TV programs and films, etc, to enjoy the achievements of other cultures across the globe.<o:p></o:p></P>
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<P>However, other people argue that these conditions also create the possible danger of undermining a country’s national identity. In the first place, traditional cultures might fall victim to a global media and entertainment force. This is most evident in some parts of the world where “Americanization” is threatening the preservation of their indigenous culture. In China for instance, few youngsters like or understand “Peking Opera”, the quintessence of Chinese culture; they go for Hollywood movies and rock music instead. Moreover, in the process of globalization, the world is getting less linguistically diverse, as a growing number of people give up their native language for the dominant language in the world - English.</P>
<P>From my pint of view, both arguments are the true reflections of the possible consequences of an increasing economic and cultural interaction among nations. It boosts economic integration and speeds up modernization but also creates tensions between a global culture and a country’s national identity. Therefore, we should take the initiative in fighting to protect our distinct culture and identity from being submerged by other cultural or economic influences.</P>
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jiaruohan 发表于 2005-11-2 00:08

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jindao 发表于 2005-11-5 06:26

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良辰美景 发表于 2006-7-22 06:20

<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>房挺</i>在2005-11-1 14:51:29的发言:</b><br/><p></p><p>From<font color="#f73809"> my pint of view</font>, both arguments are the true reflections of the possible consequences of an increasing economic and cultural interaction among nations. It boosts economic integration and speeds up modernization but also creates tensions between a global culture and a country’s national identity. Therefore, we should take the initiative in fighting to protect our distinct culture and identity from being submerged by other cultural or economic influences.</p><br/></div><p></p>

月各门 发表于 2006-8-22 20:20

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sofiamomo 发表于 2007-5-8 21:32

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weixiaojiang198 发表于 2007-10-14 11:35

“Some people say that the widening international exchanges, both in the field of business and culture, have exerted positive influences to a nation as well as its people.”
--此句中,exert influence 应用介词on 搭配,而非 to.

weixiaojiang198 发表于 2007-10-14 11:39

另:exert a + adj.+ influence on,次形式很少用复数influences

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