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千华FANS 发表于 2005-11-16 23:14

雅思高分作文精选

题目：维护道路安全是否靠加强违章惩罚
广外学生赖敏玲的八分作文，听力九阅读九！2005年9月10日考。
Recent years have witnessed a worsening trend in road safety. According to statistics from the local authority, the number of traffic accidents in 2004 was 20% greater than that of the previous year. The issue is gaining more and more concern of the public, some of whom propose that stricter punishment on traffic offenders should be the only way to ensure road safety. As far as I am concerned, I hold that punishment should not be only solution to the problem.
 
 
 
There is certainly no denying that stricter penalties may to some extent bring down the number of accidents on motorways as a deterrent to driving offences. Besides, the government may enjoy a greater revenue from severer fines, which can in turn be used to improve road conditions.
 
 
 
However, we shall never overlook the other side of the coin: punishment has its downsides. Fines, as the most common penalty for driving violations, tend to instill in people the misconception that money can pay off their guilt and resolve the problem. As a result, we can see many cases where the traffic offender commits the same or another mistake even after having been fined a lot. In spite of heavier punishment, road safety cannot be enhanced unless drivers are equipped with sufficient driving skills and knowledge. Recently there have emerged many irresponsible driving schools that have produced a host of unqualified drivers, contributing to more traffic offences. Thus tight control on driving schools and the driving testing system is needed as well to improve road safety. Furthermore, advertisements and campaigns concerned should be launched to raise the public awareness. When people are fully aware of the importance of abiding traffic rules, accidents may hopefully be eliminated.
 
 
 
From the above discussion, it is clear that only stricter punishment is not enough to enhance road safety. Instead, it should go hand in hand with closer control on driving schools and the testing system as well as higher public awareness.

千华FANS 发表于 2005-11-16 23:17

启德雅思学员 李辽7分作文 
 
 
题目：应否使用动物做实验 
 
 
 
 
 
Nowadays, experimental usage of animal has become a widely concerned issue around the world. People hold diverse views towards it. 
 
 
 
 
 
Adversaries claim that it is an extremely crude behavior. Animals, especially mammals, like dogs, cats, rabbits, rats, which are the major victims in the experimentation, are usually human’s pets. Pet owners are strongly against it for they firmly believe that animals suffer physically and mentally as we do. When equality is advocated in the modern world, it is inhuman to disrespect creatures that are not human beings. Furthermore, a number of experts pointed out that it would be at high stake of depending on the results of animal experiment; since they differ from us in many ways. Take the body structure for example, we can’t imagine humans try to jump from the height of nine stories without any protection because cats survive out of the same test. 
 
 
 
 
 
Those in favor of the idea about usage of animal declare that using animal is an advisable choice. On one hand because their bodies are similar in function to ours. For instance, they catch colds, suffer from stomachs and heart diseases, which more importantly influenced by diet and habits. The consequences of the test may not be applied to humans, although they are highly connected to the human situations. On the other hand, those creatures yell and act abnormally when they feel uncomfortable, which is what exactly researchers expect. In addition, there is an easy-to-answer question: isn’t it crueler to test directly on people with little knowledge on the objects’ effects? In a word, there is nothing better than animal that resemble human the best for experiment. 
 
 
 
 
 
Personally, I am not a supporter of animal experiments, yet there is anything more suitable can replace them, I accept using animals for tests, but take good care of them when they are not in the laboratory.

千华FANS 发表于 2005-11-16 23:19

题目：如何解决垃圾问题 
启德雅思学员 罗巾如7分作文(也是广外的呀)听力8,阅读8.5啦!
The roads are dotted with trash, the railways are littered with decaying garbage and our cities are disgraced by plastic bags. Lately, the worsening rubbish problem has aroused people’s wide concern. Some hold the belief that it is an overstatement to claim that people have formed a “throw away” society, and that they just discard the used items, which is necessary. Others, however, firmly contend that people do develop a habit of throwing things away. Personally, I firmly side with the latter. 
It is no doubt that our cities are on the way towards becoming a huge landfill. To begin with, people are in the habit of littering. Nowadays, people tend to discard old items like outdated furniture and worn-out appliance, which are actually recoverable. Furthermore, due to the inadequate facilities of garbage collection, people throw away their refuse everywhere at will. In addition, rubbish is in rapid increase. In the first place the quickening tempo of modern lifestyle gives rise to people’s favor of disposable items for sake of convenience, which greatly adds the amount of rubbish. In the second place, the development of science and technology also contributes to it. It generates new product in a more frequent way, which makes the old ones cast aside as rubbish at a quicker pace. Consequently, our cities are decorated with trash.. 
In view of the severity of the issue, we should adopt immediate measure to address it. First of all, the government should play a leading role. It ought to bring in strong anti-littering laws, backed by heavy penalties and effective enforcement, to tackle the littering behaviors. Also, officials should make good use of mass media to promote the public’s awareness of environmental protection, making sure that everyone will become a conscious environment protector. Additionally, scientists can develop efficient technologies to degrade and recycle the rubbish. Research findings reveal that 63% of the refuse nowadays are recycled. Finally, it is essential for schools to attach importance to environmental education, so that every child will become environmentally friendly and get rid of the littering habit. 
In conclusion, people’s littering habit is turning our communities into a rubbish holder. It is high time that we took joint effort to solve the rubbish problem. Otherwise, we will live with rubbish in the future.

千华FANS 发表于 2005-11-16 23:20

启德雅思学员 罗倩敏7分作文 
 
 
题目：移居外国的人应不应该接受当地的文化 
Nowadays, more and more people would like to move to other countries and settle down for better natural environment, and more educational opportunities. Whether these new settlers should accept new countries’ values and lifestyles has become a public focus. Before presenting my own opinion, I think it is essential to analyze both sides of the issue. 
People in favor of acceptance to new values claim that once you live in a new environment, you have to adapt yourself to the new community. If not, you would feel psychologically isolated. Moreover, getting yourself in the new environment, you can develop a better career, for your employer will consider you to be an adaptable person. And your family also can get themselves involved in the new community. Last but not least, as you accept the new values and lifestyles, you can learn something new apart from your own culture. 
Those who are against, however, argue that if the settlers accept new values and culture, they are considered to betray their own countries, so they no longer belong to their countries. Furthermore, new settlers are supposed to keep their own styles. For instance, their eating habits, religion believes, and so on. Last of all, it is a good way to preserve their tradition and culture, especially the ethnic, who are in minority of people. 
Personally speaking, I tend to side with the former view. Though people should have their unique styles, it is crucial to adjust to the new environment and community. An old saying just illustrates my point: When in Rome, do as the Roman.

千华FANS 发表于 2005-11-16 23:24

题目：维护道路安全是否靠加强违章惩罚 
启德雅思学员 马婷婷7分作文(也是广外的哦,总分八,听力九,阅读口语八) 
In recent years, increasing number of car accidents have claimed many people's lives. The topic of whether stricter punishments is the only way to prevent accidents has triggered heated discussion. Notions on this issue vary greatly. 
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According to the advocates,stricter punishment is the most effective way to reduce car accidents.To begin with, stricter punishment deters reckless driving behavior, like drunk driving and speeding.Drivers must learn to abide by the laws and regulations otherwise they will suffer from great loss. Furthermore, severely punished, drivers may learn a lesson and they are less likely to repeat the same behavior on the road. Last but not least,psychologically hurt and physically injured, victims of car accidents deserve the financial compensation from drivers. 
However, opponents are strongly against stricter punishment. Firstly, Competent authorities should set up stricter requirements for drivers's licence.More lectures and courses should be provided to would-be drivers. Secondly, facilitis should be improved in order to reduce road hazards. For instance, electronic notice board should be set up to drivers of the danger ahead. Finally, if drivers are sentenced to jail for a longer time, more police power and money is needed to manage them. That is to say,stricter punishment will produce heavy burden on tax payers. 
Personally speaking, stricter punishment is by no means the best solution to car accidents. More scientific measures should be adopted so as to reduce car accidents on the road. 
 
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千华FANS 发表于 2005-11-16 23:25

题目：移居外国的人应不应该接受当地的文化 
 
 
启德雅思学员 叶绿菁7分作文（华师中文系的，吴建业老师上课重点打击对象！重击之下出高分哦！<IMG src="http://bbs.mxfy.com/Skins/Default/emot/em01.gif">） 
A much-debated issue these days is whether people should accept the different values and the new lifestyle when they move to a new country. It has become a focus of public interest. Notions about it vary greatly. People can hardly reach an absolute consensus and therefore it is wise to take a closer look at the arguments at both sides before I present my pinion. 
Advocates of this hot issue hold the belief that it is imperative for people to accept the different values and the new lifestyle when they settle in a new country. To begin with, it is beneficial for immigrants to adapt social life if they learn more about the local culture and lifestyle, especially for children. It is easily for them to make friends with others in schools. Moreover, it is necessary for settlers to change their lifestyle and accept the new values. When in Roma, do as the Romans do. Last of all, immigrants will feel isolated and depressed if they have no idea about the culture and lifestyle of this country. 
 
Some other people, however, are strongly against this hit issue for several reasons. First and foremost, it is ridiculous for people to abandon their original culture and lifestyle when they move to a new country. Furthermore, it is a breach of one’s basic right if me ask them to change their lifestyle. We should show greater respect for each other’s religions and cultures. Last but not least, it is significant for people to maintain cultural diversity as it is vital for people to pass their culture on to their offsprings. Meanwhile, it would be a pity for the descendants to know nothing about the culture of their ancestor
In the final analysis, both sides have sound foundations. However, if asked to make a choice, I will not hesitate to assent to the latter. It is sensible for immigrants to keep their culture and lifestyle when they move to a new country.

千华FANS 发表于 2005-11-16 23:28

题目：小学是否应该开设体育锻炼课（G类） 
 
 
启德雅思学员 王颖7分作文 
G类有无参考作用呢？当然有……你要移民的话！
It is certainly a controversial issue whether or not sports and exercises should be held in the primary school. This issue has intrigued not only some psychologists and scholars but also some parents and students. People retain diverse opinions towards this public focus. Before rendering my opinion, it is essential to explore this complicated phenomenon from both sides . 
 
The advocators generally hold a belief that it offers a host of great benefits to student’s early education. To begin with, it instills a strong sense of responsibility which it is necessary to their future success. Children are now in the formative years, they are not mature enough so that they are vulnerable to some social evils and easily go astray. Moreover, it can increase the mutual understanding and promote friendship between teachers and students,thus forming a brand new type of student-teacher relationship. It is a symbol of student-oriented education and a step forward towards quality education. Last but not least, sports and exercises subjects help to cultivate teamwork spirits and learn to compromise and cooperate. Therefore, it creates school ethos and a sense of belonging to a particular community. As such it promotes discipline and helps to drive up academic standards. 
The opponents, however, are strongly against to this stance for the following mentioned aspects. Primarily, the system may lead to the spread of competitive, thus breeds a series of psychological problems, such as depression, negativity, selfishness, self-centeredness, introversion, suspicion, anxiety and shame which destroy character and relationships. Furthermore, sports may exert a negative impact on one’s study because it occupies too much valuable time of a student. A student’s sole task is to make good use of his limited time to acquire knowledge and skills which are essential to his future career. 
In the final analysis, both sides have its sound effects. However, if asked to make a choice, I will not hesitate to consent to the former. I firmly believe that sports and exercise courses play an active role in raising the development of student’s intelligence quotient, adverse quotient and emotional quotient which should be highly promoted in the primary school.

千华FANS 发表于 2005-11-16 23:30

浅析近期高分作文 
启德雅思写作批改中心 基础班写作主讲Lanny 
最近启德学生作文高分的好消息频传。想必每个未来的考生都希望自己将来能够像这些学生一样考到理想的分数。对于高分范文的分析能够帮助后来者们了解考试评分标准，达到这个目标。首先要感谢这些学生回忆出自己的高分作文，给后来者莫大的帮助和启迪。 
 
对于这批高分作文的总体印象就是结构清晰、论点论据充分合理、用词准确、句式多变。下面就这几点做以下深入分析。 
在谈到英语文体时，我们说每一种文章都是有自己的套路和模式，议论文也一样。一篇议论文首先就要有一篇议论文的结构，反映到雅思考试中，则一般分为等分型（即讨论题目中给出的观点的利弊两方面）以及一面倒型（即旗帜鲜明地赞成该观点的某一方面）。这四位同学使用的写作结构均为等分型。课堂上，曾经有一些学生提出这样的疑问： “老外是不是比较喜欢一面倒的辩论方式？”我想这几位同学的高分作文是对这个问题的最好回答。当然这也不等于说老外比较喜欢等分型。雅思是科学的考试，评分都有严格的标准。只要是好文章，都会得到好分数的。 
 
此外，这些学生都很好地利用上经典套句。比如黄文婷、马婷婷、叶绿菁和李辽四位同学分别用了Attitudes towards this issue vary greatly，Views on this controversial issue vary greatly，Notions about it vary greatly和People hold diverse views towards it四个异曲同工的句子，表达了“人们对此看法不一”这个概念，然后顺理成章地引出正反双方的观点。 
用词的准确性和多变也很值得一提。黄文婷遇到的雅思考题为“是否应该加大对肇事司机的惩处力度”。在提到“实施(惩罚)”时，她用过的动词包括“to impose … on”、“to carry out”和“to enforce”。马婷婷的考题是“经济是否是评价一个国家成功的唯一标准”。在表达经济概念的时候，她用过的名词包括“economic factor，economic growth，economic development，domestic economy， a sound economic system”等等。这种用不同的词汇表达同样的意义的能力，是雅思写作标准中对考生明确提出的要求，也是我们一直向学生强调的写作原则。 
句式多变也是雅思写作标准中的明确要求之一。我们看看高分同学作文中的句式。李辽的考题是“动物实验”，所用的句式包括宾语从句、非限定性定语从句、原因状语从句、条件状语从句、形式主语、并列句等等。而叶绿菁的考题是“移民后是否应该抛弃自己原有的文化”，她所用过的句型包括时间状语从句、条件状语从句、从句做宾语等。她的文章中突出的一个特点就是形式主语使用次数比较多，而众所周知，形式主语是比较经典的英语句式。 
综上所述，这几位同学的作文高分的关键在于语言语法的准确。七分的文章必须保证不能出现低级错误，例如单复数、时态，这就是语法基础了。词一定要多变，句式也要变化。背套句、在考试前设计好自己的写作模板非常重要，这样既轻松地用上了经典的句式，又在考试时节省时间。希望后来的考生能够平时多做归纳、多思考，考试的时候就事半功倍了。

千华FANS 发表于 2005-11-16 23:32

最后有一篇好东西
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千华FANS 发表于 2005-11-18 23:36

吴建业老师的学生蔡迎博(STACY)同学在7月24号考试中取得了写作8分的好成绩。下面是她的8分范文，供各位同学学习借鉴。感谢STACY的无私奉献！—— 我是广外的一名的学生，这次writing有8分的成绩还真的要感谢吴建业老师。相信很多鸭友们都听说过吴老师的套句，有些同学很不屑，但现在我想真诚地告诉大家，适当用好吴老师的套句对于考试是很有用的，因为这些句子本来就是英语中的好句子。对于写作，我的体会是按照吴老师的方法，自己写时多注意结构清晰，表达正确，有理有据，做好这几点应该会有满意的成绩。下面我大概回忆7月24号考试时所写的作文，希望对大家有点帮助！（其实写得也很朴实，没什么特别的，但我尽量按照以上的几点去写。）蔡迎博
Topic: The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the level of violent crimes in the society. Do you aggress or disagree?
Prompted by some incidents of television and film inspired crimes, the issue of whether the government should control the amount of violence in films and on television has been a contentious discussion. Views on the topic vary greatly. 
Advocates claim that the practice of controlling the amount of violence in mass media is a brazen violation of the people's basic right to know the truth of the world. For example, some films contain some violence, but they reflect the things happened around us. Rather than producing negative effects on audience, to some extent, these films educate them. Furthermore, violence in films or on television programs cultivates people's senses of crisis and responsibility, which makes ordinary people and police work better for public security. Consequently, it is irresponsible and foolish to blame the media for violence in our society.
However, opponents argue that violence in films and on television is detrimental to audience's psychology. Taking fantasy for reality, people become aggressive and eccentric. They believe things can be solved by violence. In addition, violence has negative impacts on the stability of society. Research findings reveal that 60 percent of crimes are committed by teenagers after watching films or television which had a large amount of violence. Teenagers are so vulnerable and immature that they cannot judge whether the activities performed in mass media are right or not. As an illustration, a boy killed his younger sister in Australia because he imitated the violent scenes from television programs.
In my opinion, the disadvantages of controlling the amount of violence in media outweigh the advantages. But I believe the government should label how much violence the programs contain on the screens, and parents and teachers have responsibility to guide their children and help them to distinguish right from wrong when they watch violent programs.

千华FANS 发表于 2005-11-18 23:39

The issue that whether the government should spend billions of money in space research has become very hot. It has already turned to be the core topic in the fierce debate among people.
The proponents argued that the government ought to permit the huge amount of money in the budget spending in exploring the space. There are many reasons for this. The first but not least, the natural resources on the earth is decreasing, such as water, land, oil. These are all the essential material in human's life and the modern industry. But with the expansion of population and the pollution, these resources are becoming less and less. Space research has given human a chance to move to another planet, such as Mars. Secondly, it also helps the scientists to discover new kinds of rare metals. At last, humans are always hoping to find another forms of life in the universe. As a result, people need the research of space no matter how much it costs.
The opponents, however, hold the opposite opinions about the space researches. They list several reasons against the investment in exploring space. First of all, the government's budget is so tight that it causes a lot of shortage of money in many other fields besides space research, like education. And from their point of view, other sections like education have more contributions than exploiting space. Furthermore, space researches have lots of risks connecting to the cost of lives. The third reason against the spending on the space research is that in many cases, the researches have the results, which have nothing valuable. It is just a waste of money. And if the money was used in another way, it could have done a better improvement in people's life.
In my opinions, space research really has many advantages and can improve people's daily life. But I think it doesn't deserve so much money and sacrifices of other sections in the society. The government has the obligations to spend the money in the fields such as education, health care, social insurances that can offer more improvements to make our life better.
苏毅：启德雅思学员。在五月二十九日雅思考试中获阅读满分，写作七分，听力七点五，口语六分，总分七点五分 来源： 启德教育网

千华FANS 发表于 2005-11-18 23:45

疾病治疗与预防
Prevention is better than cure: Out of a country’s health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures.
The rising costs of health care have become an issue for many countries in the world. To deal with this problem, it is recommended that a big part of the state health budget be used for health education and disease prevention instead of treatment. 
First of all, many kinds of diseases are preventable and preventing a disease is usually much cheaper than treating it. For example, people could prevent catching a cold if they dress warmly and get good rest when the weather first gets cold in the winter. But many people get sick because they fail to do so and have to spend much more money seeing a doct123 Another case in point is cancer, the leading cause of death in the world. But lung cancer, liver cancer and many other kinds of cancer could all be effectively prevented if people take measures for their health in an early stage. Small things such as smoking less or eating more healthy food would have kept millions of families from becoming bankrupt if the patients took measures for early cancer prevention. 
In addition, health education also plays a key role in improving people’s health. By giving people more information about health, countries could help people understand the importance of disease prevention and ways to achieve it. 
However, emphasizing on disease prevention is not downplaying the significance of medical treatment. After all, prevention and treatment are just two different means toward the same e12 
In conclusion, we could save money in health care and treat patients more successfully if our country uses more money on health prevention and education. 
 转自启德教育网

千华FANS 发表于 2005-11-18 23:47

教育的重要意义（刘颖妍）
<DIV>It is generally believed that education is of vital importance in individuals’ development and well-being of societies. What should education consist of to fulfill both these functions?</DIV>
<DIV>With the rapid development of modern society, education is becoming more and more crucial to both individuals and societies. The issue over what education should consist of has considerably aroused people’s wide concern. In this essay, I seek to explore this complicated topic from diverse perspectives and what influence could be brought.</DIV>
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<DIV>Among the most important aspects education should consist of, one should be stressed is professional knowledge education. On one hand, under the fierce competitive circumstance, people who have professional skills and experience attract many big companies. Therefore, study about one special area gives people more opportunities to hurt an ideal job. On the other hand, this education is also significant to develop societies in a long run.</DIV>
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<DIV>At the second place, what is also worth noticing is that physical education is necessary for students, especially for teenagers. If you want to achieve successfully in the modern societies, strong body is the first premise, which makes you always in sharp. So education should push people to take care themselves and this could bring great benefits to the healthy society.</DIV>
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<DIV>Last but not least, we should not lose sight of psychological education. Psychological problems are serious nowadays and a sizable percentage of people suffer from them. A survey conducted by a famous research organization indicates that over 40 percent of students have various psychological problems, who really need help from school and society. Even worse, if such problems cannot be solved, they could hamper the progress of well-being society.</DIV>
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<DIV>Judging from what I have been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that three aspects cannot be separated in education, which play vital important roles in the growth of individuals and societies. The fulfillment of both people and societies can be done as long as we lay emphasis on three aspects mentioned above.</DIV>
 来源： 启德教育网

千华FANS 发表于 2005-11-18 23:53

工作或学习（李维）
<DIV>Topic：sending criminal to pension or give education or job training methods instead. What is you extent? It is a long run topic whether the criminals should be sent to prison or be given education and job training, which has triggered a very contentious discussion. People retain such varied notions that they can hardly reach an absolute consensus. Before presenting my viewpoint, I intend to take a closer look at the arguments on both sides. From some people’s point of view, it is necessary to send the people who are involved in all kinds of crimes to the prison for a number of reasons as follows. First, the government set up the prison in hopes that every criminal is teached that to abide the rules and regulations. Statistics gathered by Sun Yat-sen University reveal that over 92% no longer engage in all kinds of crimes. So a prison is a ideal place for them to turn law-abiding. Then second, they have to deal with other people, from which they can learn cooperation and toleration. Not only can the criminals get benefits, but the society becomes peaceful. People live in a world of less danger and they feel less worried. Many others, however, argue that giving them education and training counts for more. The most frequently stressed factor is ignorance and poverty. The main purpose of education is to provide everyone with knowledge and ideas that will enable them to live more fulfilling and satisfying lives. It is estimated that in China the vast majority of the criminals only accept six-year primary education. They have insufficient access to education and find it hard to sustain themselves through a decent job. So education is a fundamental method to solve the problem. Moreover, education can generate their interests, which make them confident to the future. And last but not least, sending them to the prison is detrimental to their mental health. Considering themselves useless and outcast, the criminals feel depressed and frustrated all the time. To make things worse, they may become world-weary and even commit suicide. Taking into account all the above factors, we can see that both sides have sound foundations. To my mind, the advantages of education and job training far outweigh those of sending them to prison. Criminals should be given a chance to acquire knowledge and skills if they are willing to, which enhances the quality of citizens and make the society thrive.</DIV>
 来源： 启德教育网

千华FANS 发表于 2005-11-18 23:59

make in the new century(沈思思)
<DIV>启德雅思精品班学生沈思思在雅思考试中获得了作文7分。</DIV>
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<DIV>Title: Many people are optimistic towards 21st Century and see it as an opportunity to make positive changes to the world. To what extend do you agree or disagree with their optimism?</DIV>
<DIV> What changes would you like to make in the new century? </DIV>
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<DIV>Currently, confronted with the tremendous advancement of the late 20th Century, certain proportion of people hold a positive view towards 21st Century, deeming it a precious chance to change the world positively, which consequently triggered a contentious debate. Attitudes towards this issue are divergent.</DIV>
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<DIV>Advocates allege that 21st Century is undoubtedly a peaceful era, which enables to live a harmonious live and generally make some positive changes. Unlike in the yeasty years a century before, wars and conflicts are largely eliminated and economy is the core of this completely new century. Hence, as the divergence of cultures becomes less apparent, it is time that people around the world enhanced cooperation in every sphere, in order to establish the so-call global village. </DIV>
<DIV> </DIV>
<DIV>Opponents, nonetheless, cast serious doubts on the proponents’ opinions. As they claims, 21st is absolutely not a no-war-period, rather, it is the very era that allows certain powerful countries to overindulge their boundless ambitions and eventually overwhelm other countries. In this strong-country-dominated age, it is ridiculous to be optimistic and any attempt to make positive changes is naive. </DIV>
<DIV> </DIV>
<DIV>All in all, both sides have solid foundations. Personally, I tend to side with the former. First and foremost, having witnessed the basically stable situation in the late 20th Century, it is reasonable for us to believe that it is the right time for positive changes. Additionally, in the era of globalization, separate power is not enough for achieving success whereas cooperation equals to successfulness, which has been evidenced in numerous cases. Therefore, it is imperative that some modifications be made in this pivotal moment; otherwise we may miss the hard-won opportunity. As for the changes, I think apart from reinforcing cooperation, division of labor is also of vital importance. For instance, in developed countries, some high-tech industries should be encouraged, whilst in developing countries, it is wiser for developing traditional industries and agriculture. </DIV>
 来源： 启德教育网

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