[求助]老师，可以帮忙看下我这作文大概能拿几分吗？
<font face="Times New Roman">可以帮忙看下我这作文大概能拿几分吗？ 感谢大家的帮忙~！</font><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><font face="Times New Roman"></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">Nowadays, smoking is banned in some places, which is considered to be unfair by cigarette smokers. Be that as it may, I don’t really support those cigarette smokers.<p></p></font></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 14pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.0;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">I have to admit that smoking can be an entertainment for smokers to relax. And it is fairly clear that cigarettes can sometimes help smokers to think deeply and wisely.<p></p></font></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 14pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.0;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">However, on the contrary, we should seriously face up to the negative effects of public smoking. First and foremost, in so far as smokers themselves, it is acknowledged that frequent smoking does great harm to smokers. For instance, someone who struggles for dear life eventually gets lung cancer simply because of too much smoking. And he may even pass away soon, not having enjoyed what he has struggled for his whole life. A healthy body is an indispensable part in a successful life, and therefore, frequent smoking is not recommended.<p></p></font></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 14pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.0;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">Moreover, smoking costs a lot. That is, according to a recent investigation, it is estimated that a heavy smoker spends about 500 RMB monthly, which is a half of an ordinary worker’s salary.<p></p></font></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 14pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.0;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">Last but not least, anyone’s behavior of smoking will contribute to a certain space of contamination, and it is conceivable that people around him will inevitably breathe passive smoke. Then, how about others’ rights to own a healthy life?<p></p></font></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 14pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.0;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">Of course, smokers have their own needs for smoking. Yet I think that they do have to care about their health, that they do have to take their families into account, and that they do have to concern more about others in public. According to the all above, I strongly propose smokers to think before they smoke. And only the correct times and right places are to choose to smoke is where it does the least harm to all of us. <p></p></font></span></p><p></p><p></p>[align=right][color=#000066][此贴子已经被作者于2006-12-22 21:20:08编辑过][/color][/align]
1月六号的考试，希望大家能帮帮忙~ 我感觉怎么也过7奔8了吧？
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