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雅思写作经典改错训练－－广州分校新年奉献

雅思写作经典错误说明：以下为环球雅思学员练习中出现的常见错误，现汇集供各位学员作为改错练习。在错过程中不仅要做到能发现错误，还要能说出所以然。提醒自己尽量犯此类低级错误。吴建业改错几大原则：1、         一个简单句不能出现两个谓语动词！2、         可数名词不能单独存在，不是前面有a/the,则改为复数！3、         逗号不能连接两个句子，只有连词和分号！4、         动名词和不定式作主语时谓语为单数！5、         注意不要把一些介词当成动词使用！6、         介词后面跟名词或者动名词！1、            Many people are strongly against the space research, because they believe that to a developing country, this is a way of extravagant and wasteful.2、            A lot of people are struggling at the poverty line, lack of foods and shelters. Why do not use the laminated funds to help them get rid of poverty.3、            The first duty of this government is help people to get rid of poverty, disease and illiteracy.4、            The development of travel brings us a lot of job opportunity and foreign currency.5、            It must lavish their parents’ hard-earned money.6、            To many developing countries, art funding is the way of luxurious.7、            It is the governments’ obligation to improve people welfares.8、            Build stadium and theatre improve government tight budget.9、            The way of aid artists and musicians to the government dissipate the money of taxpayers10、        It is a luxurious dream to the poverty-stricken area children to accept the formal education.11、        It is a costly hobby to the net surfing.12、        To the developing countries, it is a strongly economic burden to protect the endangered species, because it must spend a lot of public funds.13、        Olympic Game can increase government revenues and employments.14、        Personal cars are a luxury good to many destitute families.15、        It is a laudable way to endeavour the poverty stricken area children accepts the formal education.16、        To many families, it is a heavy financial strain to send their child to abroad.17、        To develop the space research must lavish the limited financial strains.18、        University students take up part-time job may ease their parents’ financial burden.19、        To the government with a tight budget, it is a heavy financial strain to aid the artists and threater companies.20、        Legalization of gambling brings lots of foreign currency for government and increase a lot of chances of opportunities.    21、    经济原则22、        Many people against space research strongly, as they think space research is extravagant and wasteful to developing countries.23、        Many people are struggling at the poverty line, lack of food and shelter. Why not use the limited funds to help them alleviate poverty?24、        The prime responsibility of the government is to help people eliminate poverty, disease and illiteracy.25、        The development of tourism creates a lot of job opportunities and much foreign currency to us.26、        Playing computer games all day lavishes parent’s hard-earned money.27、        Art funding is a luxurious project to many developing countries.28、        Improving people’s welfare is the government’s obligation.29、        Building stadiums and theatres lavish the government’s tight budget.30、        The method of the government finances artists and musicians are dissipation of taxpayer’s money in fact.31、        It’s luxurious to receive formal education for the children living in the poverty-stricken area.32、        Net surfing is a costly hobby.33、        It’s a heavy economic burden for the developing countries. Protecting endangered species cost much limited public fund.34、        Holding the Olympic Games can increase the government revenues and create more employment opportunities.35、        Private car is a luxury to many destitute families.36、        It’s a laudable endeavour to help children living in the poverty-stricken area receive formal education.37、        It’s a heavy financial strain for many families to sent their children to study abroad.38、        Developing space research lavishes the limited public funds.39、        College students’ taking part time can ease parent’s financial burden.40、        To a government with a tight budget, subsidizing artists and film companies is a heavy economic burden, even a dissipation of the taxpayer’s money.41、        Legalizations of gambling can bring the government much foreign currency, create a lots of job opportunities to a great extent.  第二节      经济原则42、        Lots of people against strongly for space research, because of they consider that it is extravagance and wasteful thing to developing nation.43、        Lots of people still struggle in the poverty line, lack food and shelter. Why no use limited public funds help they solve poor life.44、        Government first job is helping people solve some problem for poverty, disease, illiteracy.45、        Development of journey industry creates so much job opportunities, bring plenty of foreign currency.46、        All days play cyber game lavishes parent hard-working money.47、        To lots of developing nation art funding is a luxurious idea.48、        Improving people’s welfare are government obligation.49、        Building stadium and theatre etc will waste governmental tight budget.50、        Government imbues artist and musician is dissipation taxpayer money.51、        To accept moral education is luxurious dream to poverty stricken area children.52、        Net surfing is a costly hobby.53、        To protect endangered species need expenditure plenty of public funds to developing nation is an economic burden.54、        To hold Olympic Games can increase government revenue, create more employment opportunity.55、        To hold car is l luxury to lots of destitute families.56、        Helping poverty stricken area children to accept moral education is a launchable endeavour.57、        On some families, sending children study abroad is a heavy financial strain.58、        Developing space research will lavish limited public funds.59、        Undergraduates have a part time work can ease parent financial burden.60、        To a government with a tight budget, subsidize an artist and company of stage is a heavity financial burden even it is waste taxpayer money.61、        Legalization of gambling can bring lots of foreign currency for government, as create some opportunity of employment.62、        Many people strongly against to the space research, because in their opinion this is an extravagant and wasteful thing to the developing countries.63、        For lots of people still struggling on the poverty line, why not using these limited finances to alleviate their impoverishment.64、        The brief obligation of the government is helping the peoples to clear off their poverties, diseases and illiteracies.65、        The development of tourist offered us a lot of job opportunities, and bring us many foreign currencies.66、        Playing the computer games all day will lavish their parent’s hard-earned money.67、        To many developing countries, art funding is too luxurious to them.68、        To improve the people’s welfare is the obligation of the government.69、        Building stadiums and theaters will waste the government’s tight budget.70、        He financial aids of the government were the dissipation of the taxpayer’s money.71、        It’s a luxurious dream to the poverty-stricken area’s children to receive formal education.72、        The net surfing is a costly hobby.73、        Protecting endangered species will spend lots of public funds, it’s a economic burden to the developing counties.74、        It will enhance the government revenues and employment opportunities that held the Olympic Games.75、        The private car is a luxury to many destitute families.76、        It’s a laudable endeavor that helping the children from the poverty-stricken areas to receive the formal education.77、        It’s a heavy financial strains to many families that to send the children to study abroad.78、        Developing the space research will lavish the limited public funds.79、        The college student’s sideline can ease their parent’s financial burden.80、        It’s a heavy economic burden even a waste of taxpayer’s money to a government with a tight budget to subsidize the artists and the drama companies.81、        Legalization of gambling can fetch the government lots of foreign currencies, and create quite a lot of job’s opportunities.82、        The PC games are a time-consuming hobby, and will occupy the valuable times of the students.83、        The net chatting wastes our precious times that we should spent on the studying.84、        The PC games were too alluring to many children abandon themselves to it.85、        The sideline takes up the student’s valuable times and affects their studying.86、        The pet-raising waste many times.87、        Some children lack of self-control and self-discipline, and reveled in the PC games and net chatting all days.88、        For earn money from part-time job, some students even skipped classes, affected their academic performance seriously.89、        Some students are immature and curious, always couldn’t resisted the temptation, and fall for the net surfing.90、        The TV can help us to kill times and drive off loneliness.91、        We shouldn’t encourage the kids to feed the pets, because it’s a time-consuming hobby, and can lead the kids to be diverted from their studying.92、        The soap operas are a time filler things.93、        The student’s should be educated to refrained themselves from the net-chatting, for their chief task is studying.94、        People who wallowed in the net always leaded an indolent life.95、        Some TV programs were very tempting and distracting; it caused many children hardly focused on their studying.96、        We should doing away with our unhealthy customs, and take part in some rewarding acts.97、        Playing PC games is a time-consuming hobby, which occupies student’s precious time.98、        Net chatting wastes our precious time that we should study.99、        Playing computer games is so alluring that many children abandon themselves to play the games.100、    Taking part-time job take up student’s precious time and affect their study.101、    Pet-raising lavishes much time.102、    Some children lack self-control and self-discipline, they renal in net games and chatting all day.103、    For taking part time job to earn money, some students even skip classes, they academic performance is affected seriously.104、    Some students are immature and curious, they can’t resist the temptation and indulge in net surfing.105、    Watching TV help people kill time and drive off loneliness.106、    We don’t encourage children to raise pets, because pet- rising in a time-consuming hobby and children are diverted from their study.107、    Soup opera is time filler.108、    Students should be educated to refrain themselves from indulging in chatting online, because students’ goal is study.109、    People wallowing in internet usually lead an indolent life.110、    Some TV programs are so tempting and distracting, so a lot of children are very difficult to focus on their study.111、    We should do away with some bad hobbits and take part in more rewarding activities.112、    PC game is a time-consuming hobby, it occupy the students’ precious time.113、    Net chatting wastes our precious time that ought to study.114、    Computer game is too auguring for many children abandon them to it.115、    A part time job take up to student precious time and affect their study.116、    Pets rising waste lots of time.117、    Some children are lack of self- control and self-disciplines, receiving in internet game and net chatting all day.118、    In order to earn money, some students skip classes and affect seriously their academic performance.119、    A part students because immature and curious, can not resist the temptation and wallow in net surfing.120、    TV program can help people kill time and drive off loneliness.121、    We don't encourage the children to raise pets, because this is a time consuming hobby, and easy to make them to diverted from study trail.<span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman&a

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