thanks
thanks up想从依家开始努力，可以在3月27号拿6分吗？
真烦人！你知道吗？我来了英国差不多半年了，但，还是什么都不懂！真后悔之前那些日子让自己过得太开心了/惨了，3/27 就要考试了，怎么办/可以给点建议我吗？教教我吧！！！！！[em08] 一定要挪倒6分~~~~但！我唔知依家可以点做？！！ up up up sound sensible! ! kk thanks~ 为什么我没看到文章？qq 我在新西兰考的雅思~总分六分,听力和阅读5.5 写作6 口语 7
其实也没什么大不了的,就是要动之以情,调其胃口.
具体的来说就是
1:讲的时后要有感情~不要从头到尾都那个调,考官也是人~~听了那么多中式英语人家会累的,所以语调与语速要适中,让人家觉得舒服.
2:一开始要开门见山,一开始就要抓住考官的心,让人家有兴趣听下去.
3:基本功要好,象单词啊,发音啊!这些都是很重要的!
以上我个人的意见,觉得是垃圾就不要管它啦.
(考的时侯用了13分钟,CUTE CARD是讲你拥有的一种电器,section 3是讲计算机对教育的影响)
还有不懂的去QQ:42824640和我谈讨吧~
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。。。 thanks 恩？ BUMBLBEE,我是5月份才考A类的雅思，现在正在复习当中，现有一篇关于“吸烟应不应该禁止”的作文，希望您能帮我指点一下关键问题之所在，在此先多谢您了。
The reports from the newspapers said that the age of the first time to smoking was declining.More and more teenage have, even many children, had a habit of smoking. And much more people died in a result of the illnesses caused by smoking than before. So some people think that the smoking should be forbiddened completely. But I disagree this point.
Smoking can renew people's energe in our daily life and arouse creatical. Imagine that a person who has smoking habit for many years is banned to smoking completely at once. Smoking has become a unnececcery part of live. When he or she is writting a report , one feels tired and lack of energe without cicago. But ,the sittuation is very dfference if one coule smoking zt this moment. Energe and ideas are no longer problems. So smoking cannot be forbiddened,for it will arise a great numbers of questions for people's daily life.
Smoking is also bring up income of country's taxes and citizen. As a farmer who breeds the plant of smoke-make has at least two times input than a general. This states is brought by one magazine . At the same time ,the businesss gives rise to the highter money . The result leads to the increasing of statue's taxes. Therefore, if smoking is banned,it will result in negative effect for country's finance.
Smoking also produces many adverse impacts. It is harmful for people's health and earth's enrironment. But , there is no one utterly perfect product under the sun. Although smoking bring about many problems,it is not influents its contribution for the whole country. It is truth that smoking bring about benefitsfor the finance of country's taxes and renewing people's energe. in my eyes, in a word , smoking cannot be forbiddened.
请问看完后觉得我的文章能得多少分？
万分感谢！
bumblebee,hf师兄？？？ 你他妈的没事闲的 你去蹭墙去
o donna, thanks for ur essay. i'd score it 6-. watch ur english grammar and expressions. just edited the first para, check it out and find things that should be improved by urself. by the way, ur idea in 3rd para sounds a lill extreme.give data to prove the fact. hope it helps. good luck.
The reports(why add 's' here) from the newspapers(what's the title and the date) said that the age of the first time to smoking was(from when? has/had been?) declining. More and more teenage have(delete 'have'), even many childrenhad ,(add 'and have') a(the) habit of smoking. And much more people died(have died from/of) (delete 'in a result of') the illnesses caused by smoking(better give examples here) than before(when?). So some people think that the smoking should be forbiddened completely. But I(never use 'i" in esssay, i know it's your opinion) disagree this point.
to fredlool,
i don't know what you're talking about.
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up d up 怎么看不到？ thanks very good, UP 怎么看不到啊？我要看
UP really? ss 看不到啊
怎么打开啊? 嘻嘻 谢谢 re