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<p>Topic: Agriculture and Manufacturing Industry, which benefits more for your country?</p><p>China is the third biggest country in the world, which occupies 9.6 million square kilometers land. In my opinion, agriculture industry development has more benefits than manufacturing.</p><p>One of the advantages is the large amount of land available for the agriculture development. This supports the growth plants to provide food for the people.</p><p>China also houses a large population and therefore the imported foodstuff we get from other countries is not enough. Hence, China need to develop the agriculture productivity to make sure it can satisfy the needs for the ever-growing population.</p><p>Before 1970s, the agriculture technology was not so developed. Peasantry used the traditional methos to plant. The agriculture is mainly dependent on the season. Hence the productivity was very low during that period，and most people live in the poverty level. After 1970s. China emphasis on the agriculture science. Machine has been used instead of manpower. The "Green House" has been set up which can control the temperature to make a suitable environment for the plants to grow up. Therefore the plantations that affected by the seasons has been greatly reduced. Nowadays, scientists still doing the research on how to improve the productivity.</p><p>To conclude, China's developmnet cant viable without agriculture industry. It is important for the people to get enough supply of food first. This will enable them to work better and build a better future</p><p></p> 首先字数不够。楼下的继续 其次
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