第一次IELTS作文,很受打击,但希望找到症结
[font=Times New Roman][size=5]Topic: Happiness is considered very important in life.[/size][size=14pt] Why is it difficult to define?[/size][/font]
[size=14pt][font=Times New Roman] What factors are important in achieving happiness?[/font][/size]
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[size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]It is no denying that happiness is the most important in life. Everyone wants it and does his or her best to seek for it. However, what is happiness? I believe that there are various of results from [/font][/size]
[size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]different people for this question. Therefore, it is difficult to give a clear and material definition to [/font][/size][size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]happiness.[/font][/size]
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[size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]In general case, people will feel happiness while they satisfy their lives. So the chief reason why it is difficult to define happiness is that people who from different living-condition or environment [/font][/size]
[size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]have their own standards which can be used for evaluating whether they are content with their [/font][/size]
[size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]lives or not. For instance, the value of happiness for those who do business is getting more and [/font][/size]
[size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]more profit [/font][/size][size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]from commerce. In contrast, for those who are living in Africa and suffering from [/font][/size]
[size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]famine, ethnic [/font][/size][size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]clashing and terrible disease, happiness means enough food, peaceful circumstance and [/font][/size][size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]better [/font][/size][size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]therapy. Besides that, another factor we must consider is the interpretation of [/font][/size]
[size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]happiness is diversity in different stage of one’s life. For childhood, happiness means growing [/font][/size]
[size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]in a benign [/font][/size][size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]setting, for [/font][/size][size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]adult, it means family intact and achievement in career. [/font][/size]
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[size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]How do we achieve happiness? In my opinion, optimistic mentality and striving continuously play crucial role in it. Only having optimistic mentality can we face bravely every difficulty and obstacle in life. It is supposed that a pessimist will feel depression easily as confronting difficulty. [/font][/size]
[size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]Another [/font][/size][size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]equally important factor is striving on which happiness is based. The more working [/font][/size]
[size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]hard, the [/font][/size][size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]closer getting to happiness. [/font][/size]
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[size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]In conclusion, the discussion of happiness accompany with human life. The difference between [/font][/size]
[size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]man’s thinking determines varieties of attitude about happiness. However, no matter what [/font][/size]
[size=14pt][font=Times New Roman][size=4]happiness[/size] is, we will continue to look for it which belong to ourselves in terms of our own [/font][/size]
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[font=Times New Roman]第一次写的ISLTS大作文，在别的论坛上发了，网友们恶评如潮，在受打击之余，觉得他们说的也有道理,但我想找到真正的症结。[/font]
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