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耿耿 发表于 2007-6-26 19:25

PS写作模版-专业志向篇(商科 & 人文科学)

[color=#000000][font=宋体][size=14pt]在申请国外大学的研究生院时,为了了解申请人的背景和素质,校方会要求申请人提供个人陈述等文字材料。国外大学非常看重这些材料,但许多中国学生的申请材料雷同乏味,很难体现申请人的特点和独特素质。相当多的[/size][/font][size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]PS[/font][/size][font=宋体][size=14pt]没有被读完就被扔到了一边,原因主要是内容千篇一律。如果申请者被认为有抄袭的行为,整个申请就前功尽弃了。要克服雷同,就必须独立思考认真去写。其实,每一个申请者都是独一无二的,即使有着相同经历的两个人,在做相同事情时的体会及能够体现出来的自身的素质也是不同的,就像世界上没有完全相同的两片树叶一样。所以在写[/size][/font][size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]PS[/font][/size][font=宋体][size=14pt]之前,一定要仔细回忆自己的经历,剖析自己的特点,从具体的事例中找到自己与众不同的地方及所具备的潜在素质,千万不要抄袭别人的文章。[/size][/font][/color]
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[color=#000000][font=宋体][size=14pt]这里的出发点是给大家提供一些[/size][/font][size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]PS[/font][/size][font=宋体][size=14pt]写作模版作为语言的范例和指导,为尊重作者和避免抄袭,我删掉了[/size][/font][size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]PS[/font][/size][font=宋体][size=14pt]中有个性的内容,只留下了可以借鉴的语言。希望大家能有所收获。加油:)[/size][/font][/color]
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[size=14pt][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman]There is room for substantial improvements in Chinese accounting. In particular, small and medium sized companies consider accounting primarily a record of past, rather than a guide for the future. Few businesses have recognized the potential to eliminate inefficiency through budget forecasting, and as a result many plagued with financial difficulties. Another problem is that modern accounting techniques are relatively new tools in China. They are frequently misunderstood and implemented ineffectively. These problems frustrated me, but I see them as challenges. I can think of nothing more rewarding than learning the most advanced accounting theories and using them to increase the competitiveness of Chinese companies.
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[size=14pt][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman]One day two decades ago, a small girl sat on the floor next to stacks of books, surrounded by her friends, spreadsheet in hands. After careful calculations, I had devised a plan to rent my comic books. Most of my friends did not understand why I charged for lending my books and felt I was being unfair. But I had a different view. As a book lover, I spent most of my allowance on books. I was willing to lend them to my friends so that they could also enjoy the stories. However, my friends often forgot to return my books and many stopped buying their own books because I always had the ones they wanted. Thus, renting seemed like an alternative method to recover some of my losses. With the coins I saved from renting my books, I bought new books. Soon my room became a small library for all of the neighborhood children. From this positive experience, I developed my interest in finance.[/font][/color][/size]

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[size=14pt][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman]I have set sight to an intellectual challenge: for prepare myself for a teaching position in economics. Although, as a student, it never occurred to me that I was ever going to the podium to teach, the idea germinated and became a burning desire a few years after I had left the academic environment during which time I had the opportunity to observe, witness and learn how sound economics could drastically improve the quality of life of people and the competitiveness of a nation and how poor economics gave rise to low morale, waste, inefficiency, depression and desperation.[/font][/color][/size]
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[size=14pt][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman]Many subjects seems intrigue to me, such as math, astronomy and aesthetics. However, communication is special. I would say it is an unassuming kind of science. It is easy to approach. It concerns with people. It understands human nature. It cares for daily life. It gives you advice. It brings surprises when you find the truth just contrasts your conjecture. All above were the reasons that ignite my desire for communication. Moreover, I found that solution to advertising, my major, lies in communication. My problems I encountered in advertising could be clarified with the theory of communication.[/font][/color][/size]

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[[i] 本帖最后由 耿耿 于 2007-6-27 15:23 编辑 [/i]]

alansttearer 发表于 2007-10-4 00:40

又是沙发,坐下慢慢看。。。

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