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耿耿 发表于 2007-7-13 17:35

PS写作模版-儿童时代与成长环境篇

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[size=14pt][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman][font=宋体]在申请国外大学的研究生院时,为了了解申请人的背景和素质,校方会要求申请人提供个人陈述等文字材料。国外大学非常看重这些材料,但许多中国学生的申请材料雷同乏味,很难体现申请人的特点和独特素质。相当多的[/font][size=14pt]PS[/size][font=宋体][size=14pt]没有被读完就被扔到了一边,原因主要是内容千篇一律。如果申请者被认为有抄袭的行为,整个申请就前功尽弃了。要克服雷同,就必须独立思考认真去写。其实,每一个申请者都是独一无二的,即使有着相同经历的两个人,在做相同事情时的体会及能够体现出来的自身的素质也是不同的,就像世界上没有完全相同的两片树叶一样。所以在写[/size][/font][size=14pt]PS[/size][font=宋体][size=14pt]之前,一定要仔细回忆自己的经历,剖析自己的特点,从具体的事例中找到自己与众不同的地方及所具备的潜在素质,千万不要抄袭别人的文章。[/size][/font][size=14pt][/size]


[font=宋体][size=14pt]这里的出发点是给大家提供一些[/size][/font][size=14pt]PS[/size][font=宋体][size=14pt]写作模版作为语言的范例和指导,为尊重作者和避免抄袭,我删掉了[/size][/font][size=14pt]PS[/size][font=宋体][size=14pt]中有个性的内容,只留下了可以借鉴的语言。希望大家能有所收获。加油:)[/size][/font]
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[size=14pt][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman]Neither of my parents received higher education. They are those contented people but perform their routine work assiduously. Their greatest hope for me is that I will grow into a virtuous person. As for whether I will be a very successful person, they do not care so much. However, this did not make me be short of ambitions. On the contrary, just because of this freedom, my desire for learning developed well. At the same time, seeing my parents get well along with people in our community, I deeply felt the importance of virtue. My parents often told me that they could not help me much in my studies but they believed that a real successful person must be a virtuous one.[/font][/color][/size]
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[size=14pt][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman]As a young child, I vividly recall the sense of wonderful mystery that one room in our house field for me. Marvelous sounds continually emerged from this workroom, in which my father, an engineer, spent much of his time. Forbidden to enter I would wait outside the door, delighted when he came out with a radio, TV set or some other wondrous new object. Finally, I was permitted to take my first step to the room I was immediately mesmerized by all that lay before me, a treasure trove of tools, electrical appliances and all sorts of equipment. Within two months I had completed a model airplane of my own. The first time I attempted to fly the plane, it had hardly risen into the sky before crashing to the ground, a wing breaking in front of me.[/font][/color][/size]

alansttearer 发表于 2007-10-4 00:51

把最后一个帖顶完,加油。。。:L

alansttearer 发表于 2007-10-4 00:53

喜欢老师的故事
尤其欣赏老师的授课方式,
还有不看文章就能做题的方法,
不仅教会我如何学习雅思(阅读),
更教会了如何承担一份责任,
真的应该多为父母考虑考虑了。。。
老俞上次来我们学校发表了一篇惊天地泣鬼神的演讲
也谈到了与老师讲课时的共同点(应该让老母亲多出去旅游,走走玩玩,出国的负担真的不应该再让父母承担了)
鄙人决定如果出国留学会尽量申请奖学金,或像老师那样去打工
(悉尼大学的物流貌似不错,呵呵,申请会考虑一下的,还有很重要的一点那里的马桶非常的诱惑我)
最后还是谢谢老师

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