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mengandielts 发表于 2007-9-25 11:39

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[font=Times New Roman]A great number of people think that those with university education should get higher pay thane those without, for they believe that the former have seated and sacrificed more.[/font]
[font=Times New Roman]To what extent do you agree with this point of view?[/font]
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[font=Times New Roman]A person with higher education, many of us believe, should be paid more than the one without . This is because that a university graduate has devoted more time and energy to learning. Personally, the claim above is relatively convincing, but there are more reasons for the higher pay than merely the effort the college guys have paid when they are young.[/font]
[font=Times New Roman]Admittedly, those who go to universities have sacrificed more for the higher education they purchase. They will probably be discouraged if they don’t get a decent salary in their work after they graduate. Therefore, fewer people will spend their most vigorous time in universities in their young age when the chances of stimulating new ideas are good. If this really happens, it may hamper the full development of our society.[/font]
[font=Times New Roman]In addition, a university graduate is likely to make greater contributions to the society. This is not only because of the wider range of knowledge acquired, but also due to a more critical and focused way of thinking that is imparted and refined during his/her senior education. Consequently, those with university education will adopt a more efficient way of working and therefore bring the company a healthy profit. University graduates are justifiably be rewarded for what they have achieved. [/font]
[font=Times New Roman]Further, as a graduate has to be trained in certain field and has mastered some professional skills before leaving university, he/she is to some extent irreplaceable. Doctors, fort instance, have to understand various kinks of diseases and do hundreds of thousands of experiments before they can prescript for real patients No one can virtually take up the job without proper training [/font]
[font=Times New Roman]All in all, there is a justification for those with senior education to earn more. The higher pay is a lens through which we can observe the progress of our civilization and the respect for the people who make great dedication to our society.[/font]

mengandielts 发表于 2007-9-25 11:46

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There is an increasing number of juvenile delinquents. Analyze the possible causes that gibe rise to this prolegomenon, and offer some feasible recommendations.

Recent years has seen a growing number of juvenile delinquencies in our community. However, various reasons contribute to the phenomenon instead of a single factor.
When it comes to the influence on the young people these days, media have to take the responsibility on its part. Internet, TV, and movies are all windows for the children to get to know about the outside world. However, the information they convey are often flooded with violence without any proper guidance, Therefore, young people are much likely to materialize wrong values.
On the other hand, the practical environment plays a significant role in the growth of a child Unfortunately, parents who are usually know as the first teacher of their children are confronted with great pressure from work and society and thus pay little attention to the young, who are in great need of instruction at the crossroad of their life. Lake of necessary care and guidance, young people may turn to crime to catch attention.
Since young people are the future of our society, some measure s have to be taken to help them walk through the valley of shadow of death . First the government can help. It should regulate the programs broadcasted on TV or radio and make sure that children can watch different programs under appropriate guidance, especially when they are something about violence. Second, the society should offer the young people a diversity of  recreational activities to fulfill their life and give a hand when they accidentally make mistakes. Most importantly ,it’s high time that parents got liberation from their heavy work and went back home to have a deep talk with their lovely children . What the young really need is the unconditional love and care from their parents.
If all mentioned above is done, the prospect of a decline in juvenile delinquencies is far from dim . We shall own a society full of sincerity and love.

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