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[font=宋体]题目是[/font][b][font=Times New Roman]Nowadays, young people tend to rush into independent. Many of them leave home to study or work while still in their teens. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.[/font][/b][b][font=Times New Roman] [/font][/b]
[font=Times New Roman]There is much discussion as to the advantages and disadvantages of young people tend to leave home to become independent at early ages. IN my point of view this trend has both of them.[/font]
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[font=Times New Roman]Obviously there are many benefits if young people become independent when young. Firstly, this provide them an opportunity to have a close and thorough contact with the real society. They may gradually accumulate their social experience which is essential for them to make sound judgment in their future life. Moreover, after leaving their parents youths have to face and overcome any difficulties by themselves. Therefore, compared with other young people who still live with their parents, it is easier for them to cultivate some good characters like unyielding and brevity.[/font]
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[font=Times New Roman]Nevertheless, it cannot be denied that there are some worrying disadvantages for youths to leave home and become independent too early. First , young people have very limited ability to tell the right and wrong, therefore they are vulnerable when in front of various temptations and bad habits of society. Second , because they are lack of self-control and the proper guide from their parents, those young people may tend to spend time on playing rather then studying or working.[/font]
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[font=Times New Roman]To sum up , just like every coin has two sides, we shall thoroughly analyze the pros and cons before we make the final decision to leave home and become totally independent.[/font]
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