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[size=12pt][font=Times New Roman]这是我写的选择荷兰和选择HAN 会计与金融的原因[/font][/size][size=12pt][font=Times New Roman]麻烦高手帮我改改吧 要没有语法错误 可用于口语[/font][/size]
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[size=12pt][font=Times New Roman]I choose Holland for these reasons. First, Holland is a country of teaching in English. And I could learn another foreign language besides English. And then, the higher education of its high quality is world-famous. It has system of sound and strong law and quality assurance. What’s more, Holland provides an international environment of study. That could make me get more things. Last, in Holland, the tuition fees is very reasonable.[/font][/size]
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[font=Times New Roman][size=12pt]HAN[/size][size=12pt] University[/size][size=12pt] is found in 1987. It has a long history. HAN University became internationally famous for its higher education of a high quality. Furthermore, its profession of Accounting and Finance has the world first-class standard. And I choose this profession mainly have under cause. Foremost, my father worked for twenty years in the bank and he also is an analyser of data of article. My mother is an international financial affairs management. I got my parents’ influence from my childhood, so I also have a great interest in economics. To be an actuary is my dream. So I choose this profession is to have more opportunity go on for further study. At present, it is difficult to find employment in China. If you have a good background you can get more chances of job. Holland is a developed country, its main wealth from the trade. Therefore, it has taken the lead in the profession of economics or accounting.[/size][/font]
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