求达人点评，4月5作文
4.5 Aircraft uses more fuel than cars and produces more pollution. Somepeople suggest the non-essential use of aircraft like international travel
should be discouraged . Do you agree or disagree?
It`s known to all that the aircraft is one of the unbelievably fantastic invention of 20th century.Meeting the increasing requirement of transportation,travelling by air has became the most common way of journey which goes to distant areas.Someone claim that travelling to another country by air should be limited,But i don`t agree with it totally.
First of all,time to save,the airplane ,in my opinion,is no doubt the most effective vechicle.Before the birth of aircraft,passagers spend years to go to another continent. On the contrary,it only takes hours,by and large,to fly from London to New York.It`s incredible without the use of plane.
What`s more ,compared with other ways of transportation,it`s comfortable and safe.For one thing ,because of the tiredness of travelling a long distance,more accidents would happen.Will you run into a car accident when you sit in the cozy arm chair of plane ?The answer is definitely no.For another ,the radio of air crashes far more less than the car accidents
On one hand,the aircrafts may pollute the air,flying in the sky.And the fuel crisis is threatening our world day by day.On the other hand ,the gross pollution mady by car is more than that of aircraft.
In a world ,travelling by air is more safe and effective than any other waySometimes,it`s even the most economical method ,because it make you
anywhere you wanna be with the least time and time is money.
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