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    二、书信第一段的写作(1-2句,30字左右)

    书信作文第一段的两个功能:1、写信的目的;
    2、与读信人的关系。
    * 命题中给出的信息一般比较模糊,没有具体的人名和事件,这些模糊信息就是写作时扩展的基本。
    1、 讲义P1
    You are studying in a foreign university and are arranged to be a home-stay student, but the living condition is not satisfied. Please write a letter to complain.
    对模糊信息的扩展↓
    I am a student at the Law School, Oxford University. When I entered the school on June 1st, 2005, I was arranged to be a home-stay student. I find that I have to complain the living condition.
    命题信息↑
    2、 讲义P1
    You have a friend who will go on holiday to a town that you know very well, please write a letter to him/her, include:
    ⑴ Recommend a place to live;
    ⑵ What he/she can do there, or where he/she can go;
    ⑶ Weather.
    I am glad to know that you are planning to visit New York city, U.S.A, which I have visited for several times(which I visited last year.). I am writing to share some information with you.
    3、讲义P1
    The school in your community lacks necessary sports facilities. Please write a letter to the manager of the sports club in the vicinity of your community asking for whether the local citizens can use the facilities of the club.
    Dear manager,
    INE>INE>INE>INE>I am the chair of the Student Body of Andover, which is 5 minutes in walking (100 meters) close to your club. However, my school is short of sports facilities, so many students are in bad physical condition. Thereby, I am writing (I write) to you to ask whether it is possible for the students to use your facilities.
    * ⑴ 此处不能用our school,our school代表两人是同一所学校;My school是指我所在的学校。
    ⑵ 如果用在称呼且不清楚对方性别时,不能写chairman/chairwoman,只写chair即可。
    4、讲义P1
    You have bought a CD player days ago and found that it didn’t work. Write a letter to the department store for refu12
    ⑴ What are the problems;
    ⑵ The unsatisfied service of the salesperson;
    ⑶ Give some suggestions.
    On June 1st, 2005, I bought a CD player (XY12-SI) at your department store at a price of $35. However, this machine doesn’t work at all. I am writing for this matter ( I write you) to know whether I can get a refu12
    5、讲义P2
    You have arranged a tour with your brother on a holiday; unfortunately he will not be able to go with you. Please write a letter to one of your close friends asking whether he or she will be able to join with you. You are supposed to tell him or her in your letter the schedule and things to be brought.
    Dear Susan,
    I am planning to travel to Rome from June 5th, 2005 to June 25th, 2005. I want to know whether you are interested in joining with me (this tour). Actually, I planned to go with my brother, who unfortunately will not be able to go with me for some reason.
    6、讲义P2
    Your town is planning to build a major new road. You dislike this plan. Writing a letter to the local government:
    ⑴ Explain the situation;
    ⑵ Why you are unhappy;
    ⑶ Give your suggestions.
    Dear Sir or madam,
    Living here from childhood, I like the environment. But, yesterday, I learned from China Daily, June 10th, 2005 that a new road would be built ( that you want to build a new road). I am writing to inform you that this project is harmful to the people and environment.
    7、讲义P2
    Write a letter to apply for a job to be a tourist guide for local travel agency. In the application letter you should state your strong points and weak points for the position and express your interest in the job.
    I learn that a position for tourist guide is open, which is got from Wall Street Journal. ( 或者另写一句:I got this information from Wall Street Journal.) I am writing to express my interest in the job. And I also enclose a copy of my resume for your reference.
    三、书信主体中间段落的写作(8句话,2-3段)
    主体段落是一个创作和扩展的过程,条件的构成是:时间、空间和人物,与IELTS写作Task 2的主体部分的构思非常相似。
    以讲义P2的题目为例:
    Your town is planning to build a major new road. You dislike this plan. Writing a letter to the local government:
    ⑴ Explain the situation;
    ⑵ Why you are unhappy;
    ⑶ Give your suggestions.
    分析:
    建新公路的坏处:
    ⑴ 要砍树;
    ATH arrowok="t" textboxrect="13963,@4,21600,@5" connectlocs="21600,0;0,10800;21600,21600" connecttype="custom">ATH>⑵ 拆一些建筑物buildings historical significance
    citizen/ local residence
    ⑶ noise;
    ⑷ pollutants:the project will be harmful to environment and people。
    §1 书信的开头段
    Paragraph 1st
    Dear Sir or madam,
    Living here from childhood, I like the environment. But, yesterday, I learned from China Daily, June 10th, 2005 that a new road would be built ( that you want to build a new road). I am writing to inform you that this project is harmful to the people and environment.
    §2 书信的主体中间段
    Paragraph 2nd 复合句↓
    Firstly, it will strikingly destroy / does harm to the local plants and animals if the road is built. For one thing, according to your plan, more than 372 trees will be cut down for the construction. But please pay attention to the fact that some of the trees are as old as 500 years. For another thing, the road is planned / will be across a river. That is to say, you will build a bridge. Undoubtedly, this will be a disaster to many fish and some other animals living in the river. 注意:fish是单复同形词汇↑
    Paragraph 3rd
    Secondly, the local residents will be greatly negatively influenced not only because the cars, trucks, and other vehicles produce noise, but also because the pollutants from the vehicles, beyond all doubt, contaminate the water, air, and the soil. 多重复杂句↑,9分
    Paragraph 4th
    倒装句↓ 正面与反面↓
    Therefore, may I suggest that you reconsider the pros and cons of your projects. Although, the road will play some economic roles, the environmental and people must be the focus. 世界发展的两大主题↑
    §3 书信结尾段,礼貌语言
    Paragraph 5th
    Thank you for any of your consideration.
    ×××××
    ×××××
    Sincerely yours,
    Helen Wang
    6st Writing Lecture
    1、讲义P3

    You are going to a foreign country. Where you have booked a room from the accommodation service, however, there is something wrong with the situation. So you have to cancel the trip. Write a letter to the service t
    1) remind the service of your booking;
    2) explain what has happened;
    3) explain the requirement of your new apartment.
    I booked a single room at the price of £30 per day (with the reduction of 5% off / with the deposit of £10 ) in the name of Miss Wang on July 4 ( from July 4 to July 7), Monday. Unfortunately, due to some reason, I have to cancel this trip.
    I planned to leave for New York on July 2, but the CEO asked me to take part in an important conference(如果字数不够,可以增加关于会议重要性的内容) at Hongkong. Therefore, my trip to your city has to be postponed from July 8.
    So, may I ask you first to help me cancel my booking and make a new one. I will arrive at your hotle on 3:00 pm NewYork time July 10th. My requirement for the new room doesn’t change/is that….
    Thank you for any of your help. Please call me on 86-10-12345678 before July 1 to comfirm.
    2、讲义P3
    You attend a two-day course. Write a letter to the course organizer. Describe details about the course and suggest how to improve it.
    I attended your Management Training at GH, Beijing, China, from July 7 to 9. The courses you offered are a success to your business, but not so successful to me. I’m writing to point out some key flaws in your course for your reference.
    3、讲义P3
    You have to work for a year in another city. At that time, one of your friends agreed to look for accommodation for you. Write a thans letter t
    1) explain the location of accommodation;
    2) explain the requirement of the house;
    3) express your gratitude.
    4、讲义P4
    When you traveled somewhere by train, something happened during the journey;
    1) describe the train you took;
    2) explain what happened;
    3) ask the train company to do what they can for you.
    5、讲义P4
    Your friend plans to come and spend holidays with you but you are unavailable at that time. Write a letter to apologize and offer some alternatives.
    Nothing makes me happier than your plan to share the summer holiday with me in Rome, Italy. Imagining the games we will play and the time we will drink coffee in the summer afternoon. In a bar close to the sea, I suddenly feel that the time is too long to wait. Unfortunately, from July 15 to Sep 2, I will not be available.
    6、讲义P4
    One of your colleagues will come to your city to join in a project with you. Write him a letter to tell him:
    1) you will meet him at the airport;
    2) the arrangement of working schedule after his arrival for a few days;
    3) tell him not to forget to bring the laptop computer and some medicine to prevent illness.
    7、讲义P4
    Your hired a car from a company in holiday, but there happens a small accident on it. write a report to the company to explain. Your report is expected to incide:
    1) when and where did you hire it;
    2) how the accident happened;
    3) what kind of action did you take after the accident.
    8、讲义P5
    A newspaper reported that there are traffic problems happening in your neighborhood. Write a letter to the authority of local community.
    1) explain about the problems and how do you adopt the transport;
    2) describe your inconvenience and express your discomfort;
    3) offer some solutions to solve the problem.
    9、讲义P5
    You missed an important appointment because the train was delayed. Write a letter to the relevant department to complain.
    1) give the reason that the appointment was important to you;
    2) describe what bad effect was on you;
    3) what they must do for you.
    10、讲义P5
    After visiting the historical museum on your holiday, you found you had lost a shopping bag in a museum. Write a letter t
    1) tell them when and where you lost the bag;
    2) describe the characteristics of the bag and the contents;
    3) suggest what the museum should do.
    11、讲义P6
    You planned to make a tour to Britain with your family. However, local bus company made some changes on their service. Write a letter to the company t
    1) describe the detail of the changes;
    2) explain what problems you and your family will have;
    3) give a solution what you want them to do.
    12、讲义P6
    You are studying English in a new school in a new city. Write a letter to your friend t
    1) describe the place you are living;
    2) explain why you like the place;
    3) introduce the class which you are studying in.
    13、讲义P6
    You moved to a new apartment. Write a letter to your friend t
    1) tell him the reason of moving;
    2) describe the new apartment;
    3) invite him to visit you.
    14、讲义P7
    You planned to attend a birthday party of your frie12 However, something emergent happened and you were not able to join the party. Write an apology letter t
    1) explain the emergency you met;
    2) express your apologize;
    3) think of a way tomake your friend happy.
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