大家看看我这能有几分?
1月8号香港考的,第一次考比较紧张,感觉作文写的有问题.多少好像是偏题了.
题目大概是这样的: how much should we trust the journalists? what is your opinion?
我写的是: 开头+结尾+ 2段 (1\ in some countries, due to political reasons, what
is told by the journalists may not be what they really see. 2\even in
those democratic countries, what is reported by the journalists can
also be biased (i gave an example, which is: before the iraqi war, xx
famous newspaper told the public that there are definitely mass
destructive weapons in iraq. the fact is that the journalists are
cheated by the government. although they apologized later to the
public...)
结尾的时候才发现有问题,又没时间了,就很笨地加了一句"我觉得即使记者反映的事实,我们也要先看看记者的智商,根据他的智商决定是否信任他"
文章还算流畅,最后有一个比较明显的语法错误.
虽然我奋笔疾书了,但是还不够时间,真受不了
