你要
A -- BRAINSTORMING
B--OUTLINING
C--WRITING
D--CHECKING UP
写作的关键是和呀司的平分分不开的 而这当中AIE 是关键。以V103为例子
ARGUMENT：To me I presume Women are not the right human beings for army forces generally.
IDEA1 ：The reason of my objection of this issue is due to women’s physical conditions in comparatively weaker status.
EVIDENCE 1：The war or other military urgency are cruel and need tougher body to handle it. Men under such situations are more suitable than women
IDEA 2： However feminists disagree because they feel women’s right is violated
EVIDENCE 2：This is understandable for they equal the situation with the workforce scenario, which won t result in casualty or loss of life. Battlefield, on the hand, is totally different than what is sometimes call second battlefield of business
CONCLUSION：What I want to appeal is a more harmonious society in which men and women take different roles in making batter world to live and love
其实 结构是首先要看的，表达要一点一点作到
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