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写了一篇作文,敬请老师斧正

写了一篇作文,敬请老师斧正

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many scientists believe that now we can study the behavior of three-year-old child to see whether they will grow up to be criminals

to what extend to you think the criminal is the production of human nature and can we stop the chirlden to grow up to be criminals?

关于孩子从小的天性以及长大后犯罪的关系,问有没可能stop孩子的growth以阻止未来的犯罪。

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Have you ever found that a lot of boys become criminals when they were forced out of schools? Have you ever seen that the parents’ behavior can affect their children? Have you ever felt that a benign environment is very important for children’s growth ? If you have the experience above mentioned, you may agree with my opinion that a child who will grow up to be a criminal due to the education which was given by our society especially his parents or primary school .For this reason, we can prevent the children to commit crimes by education.

On one hand, education and the social experience is the safe guard for underage students to keep out of crimes. Some professors said that a person who have the experience of law study will have the fewer rate to become a criminal than other persons. Owing to the important about law education, schools should spend some time to teach laws to their students.

On the other hand, family should have the correct attitude on their children when they do something wrong. In particular, as a child have some foolish actions, we can not reproach him. Undoubtedly, we should point out his faults in a right way. How can we say it is useless? And can they grow up to be a criminals?

Last but not the least, I make the following recommendation. Firstly, we should enhance the education for youth.. Apart from this, we can make the students to understand strength rather than weakness, conviction rather than doubt, decision rather than drift. Secondly, the society should invest more energy. In addition, the government should provide much money and do some contribution for young student going back to school and reunion with their parents.

To sum up. The scientists’ research that children will grow to be a criminal by the wrong behavior when they are 3 years old is one-sided. Clearly, we can help the young children to get a successful life and a colorful future by fit educations. How can we say it is terrible?

broderick.go.nease.net

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Have you ever found that a lot of boys become criminals when they were forced out of schools? Have you ever seen that the parents’ behavior can affect their children? Have you ever felt that a benign environment is very important for children’s growth ? If you have the experience above mentioned, you may agree with my opinion that a child who will grow up to be a criminal due to the education which was given by our society especially his parents or primary school .For this reason, we can prevent the children to commit crimes by education.

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Last but not the least, I make the following recommendation. Firstly, we should enhance the education for youth.. Apart from this, we can make the students to understand strength rather than weakness, conviction rather than doubt, decision rather than drift. Secondly, the society should invest more energy. In addition, the government should provide much money and do some contribution for young student going back to school and reunion with their parents.

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确实没有让我写解决的办法,我觉得写一些解决的办法会不会让考官觉得有些深度?或者觉得你的作文与众不同?还是得到的是一个倒扣的分数??
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谢谢老师了

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