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13.Should university provide student specialized course or skill for workplace or university should offer course in its own snack，regardless of whether it is useful for work.
During the furious competition society.Ability of work and skill training have become very important in modern scciety.Therefore,I consider university should provide student workplace skills.Because,It could promoted experience with university students.
The mains reason is that more and more students work hard,as well as they have abundant academic knowledge and theoretical knowledge while they are deviod of practical training.Fox instance,in the large automobile companies,there are many car stylist know many professional knowledge,but,if their cars have trouble in road,may be they cannot repair it.So i believe that university should provide workplace skills.
Second,the professional theoretical knowledge that it is necessary to work of future.Recently,many companies need large numbers of skill-workers this is because that generic university students omly have thoretical knowledge.as far as know arcoding to up-to-the-minute news,America companies need many skill-workers.But,many stuedents only have theoretical knowledge while many university students cannot find corking work.if unrversity students not only have academic knowledge but also have professional skill,They will find a perfect work.
In conclusion,I strong hold that workplace skills are very important in society that it infulence student's work in the future.Therefore, university must provide professional knowledge and workplace skills.It is necessary to let university that provides plenty of practical training.
