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se days there is a controversial debate: some people believe animals are faithful
friends, it is unnecessary to kill them, which is cruel, meanwhile other people
think the meat of animals is good for people’s healthy diet. In my opinion, if k
illing animals can not threat their extinction and species’ continuing , we can
do it for making people’s skeleton stronger, and we must keep ecological balance
.
       Initially, keeping ecological is priority. As we know, human-beings are i
ntelligent animals so they have independent relationship with animals. Keeping an
imals’ birth and death naturally is basic principle for keeping ecological balan
ce. However, it also has a lot of people to destroy this natural balance and caus
e many species’ extinction. A survey conducted by Beijing University gives me a
deep expression to illustrate this point. It says: there are more than 100 specie
s disappeared on average a year.’’ It does not incredible imagine, does it? I a
lso have a personal experience to support my viewpoint. Some day I went to a fore
st for playing, I found several people are hunting a tiger, which is protected by
our country, and they also said:’’we have a delicious food for lunch.” So in
my opinion for this kind of action, government should take efficient measure to r
egulate, and at the same time we should enhance people’s awareness’ for protect
ing animals in a long term.
        On the other hand, some people think eating animals for healthy diet, I
want to argue ,in our world ,there are a lot of vegetarians ,take my grandmother
for example ,she has a good health. As we know, Inuit people just eat fish for fo
od, not various meat, but they also have good health.
        Those people who have an excuse for their good health to kill a lot of ‘
innocent’ animals, please stop. Listen to the animals’ cry; Look at their tears
from eyes, do you have mind to do it continuously. Protecting animals is not onl
y for animals themselves, but also for the existing of human-beings.    336word         
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