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老师,看看能拿几分,谢谢!!!

老师,看看能拿几分,谢谢!!!

What’s your view about telling the truth?

In modern society, especially in metropolis, telling truth has undoubtedly been considered as a dispensable character. The traditional point view that honest character is virtue is gradually fading from people’s mind, isn’t it? Diverse contributing factors can be identified. In the following, I would like to present my point of view.

Compared with the past, deceits are increasingly emerged. People who want to catch succeed without hard work has lied frequently. It is a good example that many undergraduate students who cannot obtain the diploma because of underachievement have bought the fake certificate to cheat institutions inviting applications for jobs. These actions dramatically have demolished the credit standing of graduated students.

It is an undeniable fact that the social competition is becoming increasingly fierce. People want to seek for good pay positions at all cost. Moreover, the pressure of living has deteriorated the phenomenon that telling the truth is regarded the unnecessary character. In addition, telling truth infrequently appears within intimate relationship such as husband and wife, families, closed friends. Cheat is becoming the flexible custom in the vicious circle of pursuing profit.

In a final analysis, I do believe that the urgent steps must be taken. We must let our culture and education to guide us in everyday life, and not allow the profits to make our decisions for us. It is obvious that a comfortable but spiritually empty life, without the facility and true emotion of kinship and friendship would not be worth living.

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老师,还请教一个问题,我现在练习写作,常常写一篇文章出来要一个多小时甚至更久。

我是应该完全不查阅资料,计时练习呢,还是应该这样查阅着不计时联系呢??

谢谢!!!

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你好,从你的语言可以看出你具备了很好的英语基础,词汇用的比较恰当,语法也很好地从多样化的句子体现了出来。我相信只要你能坚持练习,一定可以突破7分的。不过这篇文章呢,主要存在的问题就是论述稍微有些离题,而且不很充分。题目其实是要求对 telling the truth进行讨论。那你就必须得有个明确的观点,支持 telling the truth或反对,或者分类在某种情况应该 telling the truth,某种情况不应该 telling the truth。很明显,文章从一开头就偏离了题目的要求,虽然句子写得很是漂亮。雅思写作一定要扣紧题目写,否则就是语言再好,也是徒劳的。至于平时的练习,我的建议如下:不要限制时间。写作之前最好能列个提纲,也可以参考一些资料,但在提笔以后,最好能安静的埋下头来,认真的按照提纲将文章写好。然后,其实也是最重要的工作,参照相关的资料,将写好的文章更正修改,针对自己写作时碰到的问题和写作中出现的问题,做一些针对性的练习。如果能坚持这个过程,我相信你一定可以取得长足的提高。当然了,我们环球雅思学术写作中心也可以在写作方面给你提供一些帮助,如雅思作文的修改,这是一个非常重要的过程,希望能够引起你的重视。

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以下是引用zoey在2005-12-13 3:09:32的发言:

老师,还请教一个问题,我现在练习写作,常常写一篇文章出来要一个多小时甚至更久。

我是应该完全不查阅资料,计时练习呢,还是应该这样查阅着不计时联系呢??

谢谢!!!

谢谢老师!我会努力,我是希望自己努力一下,放假再去环雅,你有什么好建议呢?

另外,我的作文时间比较长的问题你有什么看法呢?

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刚开练习始写作时,时间长完全可以理解的。有些同学写一篇文章甚至冥思苦想好几天,但只要你能坚持练习,并注意修改和总结,一定可以明显提高速度和质量的。来环雅学习,我们当然欢迎了,只要你用心,相信你一定可以在环球学到获益非浅的。[em05]
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