对于大多数国内雅思考生而言，5-6分是比较容易取得的分数。但是很多考生的分数一直不满意，却又找不到原因。其实在于语言基础太不扎实，出现大量语言错误，通篇充斥着句子结构和用词错误，甚至于第一段就出现“低级”语言错误十几处，让考官目不忍睹。
以下是我在批改作文过程中总结的错误，及修改的答案。
1. The invention of computers makes people live more comfortable and convenient.
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2. Don’t put hand in pocket.
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3. Many traffic accidents occurred is the result of careless.
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4. Last night was too cold.
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5. By comparison, nuclear energy has some distinctive advantages, such as it is very clean and cheap.
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6. Some people claim that fast food will instead of traditional food.
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7. Despite he is very diligent at study, he stills cannot pass the IELTS test.
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8. I finished homework and went out of dormitory for a drink.
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9. Though the Internet has many benefits, but it also has some drawbacks.
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10. If you are convenient, please give me a hand.
参考答案
1. The invention of computers enables people to live more comfortably and conveniently.
2. Don’t put your hand in your pocket.
3. Many traffic accidents occurred, which is the result of carelessness.
4. Last night it was too cold.
5. By comparison, nuclear energy has some distinctive advantages; for example, it is very clean and cheap.
6. Some people claim that fast food will replace traditional food.
7. Although he is very diligent at study, he still cannot pass the IELTS test.
8. I finished my homework and went out of the dormitory for a drink.
9. Though the Internet has many benefits, it also has some drawbacks.
10. If it is convenient to you, please give me a hand.
