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v120 museum (个人作文,希望对大家考试有帮助)

v120 museum (个人作文,希望对大家考试有帮助)

今天刚结束考试,也不知道结果是福是祸?在此捐出自己以前写的一些作文,希望对九月以前的朋友有点帮助,个人水平有限,只供参考!

As you are aware, museum is a certain building whick displays the collectiong of artistic, historic, natural or scientific objects. No one can deny that such a building has its own important purpose in a city. In this essay, i will discuss this issue as following.

To begin with,  i think that the major purpose of establishing a museum is collecting, arranging and protecting the achievement of human civilization. As to all art museum, it collects the great painting works after collecting and erpairing them. as to a historic best of its culture. Nothing clse can play such an important role. without museum, we will lose many treasurable things.

Secondary, people can learn great deal of knowledge from all kinds of museums. Form a natural museum, people can know the evolutiong of our earth's ecosystem.In a scientic museum, poeple can know the latest development of technology are sicence. It is a very good place for people, especially for children , to enlarge their vision. In addition, museum is a good place for people to spend their spare time and it is a hot point of tourism.

Lastly, museum is regarded as an important academic research centres. In the fields of history, art and archeology, no one can doubt its leading roles with the abundant collections which is the valueless research resources, people can gain more and more achievement in their research fields with the help of museums.

To sum up, museum has its own important purpose and it is very necessary for our society. Government can invest more money to museum to supoort collecting, repairing and researching work. Secord, private groups and individrals can be a source of furd. Meanwhile, museum can get furds through ticckits system.  In a word, with eh coopeation of govement, individvals and museum itself, our museum can contribute more to the citizions in their life.

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写得不错,只要不是个特别严格的鬼子,那应该可以打6分
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我感觉,5-6分的样子吧……总的来说还是不错的。如果联结词多点就更好了。
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