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范文分析-动物试验

2005年9月17日A类Task 2 考题 

 

 

WRITING TASK 2

 

 

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Some people think that using animals for experimentation purpose is cruel, but other people think that it is necessary for the development of science.

Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

 

 

 

 

考题解释

 

 

有些人认为把动物用于试验目的很残忍,但是另一些人却认为这对科学的发展是必要的。请讨论这两种观点并给出自己的观点。

关键词

experimentation

实验;试验

 

 

cruel

残忍的

 

 

 

 

 

 

考题分析

本题讨论的话题是是否可以拿动物作试验。考题中有两种观点,分别是支持和反对。因为提问中有明确的“discuss both views”的指令,因此两种观点都必须讨论到。最后的观点可以采取折衷的方案,即动物是否可以用来试验应该取决于试验的性质或者动物的种类等。

类似考题

Some people think that the animals should be treated as pets; others think that animals are sources of food and clothing. What is your opinion?

 

 

Aquariums and wildlife sanctuaries are seen as sources of education and entertainment for families. They are also essential to conduct life-saving research. However there is opposition to confining animals in this way. Discuss some of the arguments for and against the maintenance of zoos.


范文

 

 

A chimpanzee is perhaps the animal most closely related to humans; but instead of treating the animal with love and respect, we subject it to cruel and inhumane scientific and medical experiments to further human development. What a cruel fate for the unfortunate chimpanzee. Or perhaps, in life as in the jungle it is survival of the fittest, and so, as the most intelligent animal we are just exercising our right to dominate and use other animals as we wish.

 

For many people the issue of using animals for science is black and white; either very pro-animal rights, or very much in favour of using animals since we are the highest level creature. On the one hand, some people say that subjecting animals to pain and torture is truly barbaric; higher-level animals share with us feelings, thoughts and behaviors and so we should look after them and respect them. They may also feel that if we are so unsure about the effects of a drug for example then we should do further chemical testing before doing live and sometimes cruel animal testing.

 

Others, however, believe that we must use animals for the benefit of our own species (humans); to test drugs, cosmetics and new developments in science which will provide a safer and better lifestyle for us. Very few people are inherently cruel, but they still believe it is either them or us; it is better to test the drugs on a monkey rather than on a person.

 

Being cruel for the sake of being cruel and with no tangible results to show for it is definitely stepping over a boundary of acceptable behavior, but at other times if the benefits of the research are explicit, tangible and valuable then I feel that the research is justified.

 

 

 

 

 

 

296 Words

 

 

 

 


谋篇布局

 

 

 

 

第一段

引言段,背景介绍并给出观点

 

 

在第一段里作者先介绍了考题的背景。用黑猩猩(chimpanzee和“适者生存”(survival of the fittest的事例来证明人类正在为了自身目的让动物遭受痛苦。

第二段

主体段1,反对动物试验的理由

 

 

本段首先承认在是否可以把动物用于科学试验这个问题上存在明显分歧,既有人支持也有人反对。随后重点讨论了反对动物试验的理由:

u     理由一: barbaric
动物和人类一样有情感、思想和行为(feelings, thoughts and behaviors,我们应该照顾它们尊重它们(look after them and respect them。让动物遭受痛苦和折磨是野蛮的行为(truly barbaric

u     理由二: chemical testing
如果对药物的疗效不是很确定(unsure about the effects of a drug,应该进一步进行化学试验(do further chemical testing,避免用动物进行残忍的活体实验。 

第三段

主体段2,支持动物试验的理由

 

 

在第三段中作者讨论了另外一种观点,即应该支持动物试验。理由也有两条:

u     理由一: safer and better lifestyle
动物试验可以帮助人类测试药物、化妆品等(test drugs, cosmetics给人类带来更安全和舒适的生活(safer and better lifestyle)。

u     理由二: better than testing on human
有些人觉得既然一定要用活体试验,那么用猴子做试验总要比用人试验要好(it is better to test the drugs on a monkey rather than on a person. 

第四段

总结,并给出作者观点

 

 

最后一段作者提出了自己的观点,认为如果是为了残忍而残忍而且没有任何效果,则绝对是超出了可接受行为的范围(stepping over a boundary of acceptable behavior。但如果研究所带来的利益是明显、实际并且有价值的(explicit, tangible and valuable,则这些试验是合理的(the research is justified.


重点词汇

 

 

subject … to…

 

使……屈从于……;使……遭受……

The inquiry found that the court had subjected them to unfair treatment.

 

 

inhumane

 

adj.残忍的;不人道的

Conditions for prisoners were described as inhumane.

 

 

survival of the fittest

 

适者生存

Survival of the fittest” is the result of natural selection.

 

 

in favour of

 

支持;赞成

He voted in favour of the bill because he wants to please the law makers.

 

 

torture

 

n.折磨;痛苦

Half of the prisoners died after torture and starvation.

 

 

barbaric

 

adj.野蛮的;粗野的

She found the idea of killing animals for pleasure barbaric.

 

 

species

 

n.物种;种类

Over a hundred species of insect are found in this area.

 

 

explicit

 

adj.外在的;清楚的

She was very explicit about what she thought was wrong with the plans.

 

 

boundary

 

n.边界;分界线

The Ural mountains mark the boundary between Europe and Asia.

 

 

tangible

 

adj.切实的;实际的

Other tangible benefits include an increase in salary and shorter working hours.

 

 

justified

 

adj.有道理的;合理的

I accept that the criticism is completely justified.

 

 

inherently

 

adv.天性地;固有地

There's nothing inherently wrong with his ideas.

 

 

实用句型

 

 

以……为目的  for the sake of …

 

 

在表达“为了……(目的)而做……”这种概念时,可以用“for the sake of”来表达,相当于“because of... 或“for the purpose of...”例如:

Let's not disagree for the sake of = because ofa few pounds.

Let's say, just for the sake of argument/for argument's sake = for the purpose of this discussion), that prices rise by 3 per cent this year.

You're only arguing for the sake of arguing = because you like arguing.

此外,我们还可以用“for its own sake”用来表达类似的概念,例如:

I study for its own sake.

Don't use technology for its own sake. Use it when it's the best or the only way to provide information.

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范文:私家车的利与弊

Advantages and disadvantages of private cars.

    With the fantastic spur both in industry and in economy in China, the number of people who own private cars is on the rise. Some people have bought cars of their own, and others are planning to buy cars. But there have been two quite different views on this phenomenon.
      

     Some claim that there are many advantages brought about by cars. First, the automobile industry provides jobs for countless workers and strong support for other industries. Second, if conditions permit, owning a car can make us work more efficiently. Finally, life will become more convenient. A car allows one to move freely and with a car there is no need to wait for the bus in the cold or under the burning sun. 
    

       However, others strongly object to the increase in developing private cars. They hold that automobiles will give rise to a series of problems. In the first place, as more and more cars are produced and run in the street, a large volume of poisonous gas will be given off, polluting the atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people. Next, private cars contribute to traffic congestion so greatly that the advantages gained in comfort and freedom are often cancelled out by the frustration caused by traffic jams. The last problem is the increasing number of car accidents that have killed and will kill a lot of people in a friction of a second.

     In my opinion, although automobiles have been playing a vital part in the daily activities of our society, they also bring us numerous troubles such as more serious environmental pollution, more traffic accidents and more energy consumption. They drink up huge amounts of fuel and throw out huge amounts of pollutants. Traffic accidents kill thousands and thousands of people each year and cripple more. Jams waste our precious time. Therefore I am against developing private cars.

议论文写作素材-building theaters

Some people think that government shouldn’t put money on building theaters and sports stadiums. It should spend more money on medical care and education. Agree or disagree?

 

 

Disagree

 

 

1.       Theaters are places where different forms of arts including films, concert, dramas and operas etc., are shown or performed. Many of them are educational and can teach people about the history and culture of their own countries and of other foreign countries. They can also teach people about love and hatred as in opera Romeo and Juliet; good and evil as in the movie “Schindler’s list”.

2.       Apart from work, people should have some entertainment to relax and enjoy their spare time. If there are no movie theaters, people will have no place to go for watching movies and people’s lives will become less interesting/dull indeed.

3.       Sports stadiums are places where sports competitions are held which can increase people’s awareness of the importance of a healthy body. Then people will attach more importance to physical exercises which is the best way to prevent disease.

4.       Sports stadiums can also educate people about fair competition as well the spirit of cooperation. It also encourages people to try to challenge one’s own limit in order to achieve better accomplishment.

5.       Some theaters and sports stadiums are great works of architecture and can represent a country’s or a city’s wealth and level of civilization. The Grand Theatre in Shanghai becomes a symbol of Shanghai. Sydney Opera House is a landmark in Sydney.

6.       Theaters are an ideal venue for cultural communication and sports stadiums are good places for strengthening good relationship among nations.

议论文写作素材-theoretical knowledge VS. practical training

Some people think that university should not provide theoretical knowledge, but to give practical training beneficial to the society. Do you agree or disagree? Use your own experience and knowledge to support your idea.

 

 

1.       Theoretical knowledge IS beneficial to the society.

 

 

a)         Theory study is providing powerful tools for us to deal with the world around us as well as the body within ourselves

Physiological/medical theories enable us to understand the way our body works so that we know how to combat diseases more effectively.

Economics theory helps explain such phenomena as inflation and unemployment.

Scientists, through theoretical study in gravity and by pure calculations of the orbits of planets Uranus and Neptune, predicted the existence of the ninth planet Pluto, which was later verified by observation.  

b)        Theoretical findings pave ways for more advanced scientific as well as social studies.

Take mathematics for example. Many people are under the impressions that advanced mathematical study in university is so theoretical that it does not have any practical value. However, the truth is that, ours is an age in which all areas of science are permeated more and more by methods and approaches derived from theoretical knowledge in mathematics. Even marketing, once believed to be just an art of persuading people to buy, is now becoming a scientific subject based on statistical studies of market data, which requires profound mathematical knowledge.

 

 

2.       Practical trainings are based on theoretical knowledge. / Practical trainings and theoretical studies are interrelated.

a)         Some professions require that people have solid understanding in theoretical knowledge before going into practice in those professions.

For example, to be a qualified doctor, someone will have to first learn theoretical knowledge at a medical school for a few years in various related subjects including medical science, humanities and social sciences. Then at the final years at the school, he or she will be given chance to practice as an intern in a hospital to gain practical experience. Only with a combined knowledge both in theory and in practical skills can a person truly become a successful doctor. The same goes with a number of other professions such as lawyers, psychiatrists etc.

 

 

3.       We have specialized schools such as polytechnic schools and vocational schools etc. which can provide practical trainings, for example schools specialized in teaching cooking skills. Therefore universities should focus more on theoretical knowledge.

议论文写作素材-old people VS. young people

Some people believe that in order to give opportunities to new generations companies should encourage high level employees who are older than 55 to retire. Do you agree or disagree? Why?

 

 

 

 

advantages/strengths

disadvantages/weaknesses

young people

energetic and active

creative

bold, ready to take risks

fast learning

open-minded, ready to try new things

equipped with the latest concept in business and management

inexperienced

not practical sometimes

having ambitious plans but not down-to-earth approaches

not loyal, change work frequently

 

 

 

 

old people

experienced

thoughtful

insightful

visionary

knowledgeable

well-established social network

loyalty