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这个题目出自剑桥雅思3的test3 writing task 2,如下：
In many conuntries,children are engaged in some kinds of paid work.Some people regard this as completely wrong,while others consider it as valuable work experience,important for learning and taking responsibility.
本人大作如下：
  Some children participate in some kinds of work for pay in many countries.some people oppose this kind of thing while others agree it.As far as I have concerned,children should not be engaged in paid work.
  First of all,children have not reached a certain age when they have the responsibility to feed themselves.Instead,their parents are in response.Without the good care from their parents,children can not grow up in a proper way.As is known to all,in the workplace,varieties of people are working there,including some people who are harmful to our society.On this occassin,what those children learn from work is not work experience but some harmful things,such as violence,drugs,sex and so on.Another reason is that if children enter society too early,they would learn the importance of money.This is fine in some respects,but in the long run,if a children cares money only,how can he or she care anything else that may be more important than money,for instance,friendship,family,love,etc？I really do not want to see that these children become cole-blooded and selfish.
  However,some families are so poor that the parents have to send their children to paid work to release their loads.In this situation,children do not work for themselves,instead,they are working for the whole family.To settle the problem,in my opinion,the most efficient method is improving economics more rapidly.The government should provide more chances for children from poor families to study normally instead of working.
  So,children should not do any kinds of paid work.Anyway,they are too young to be capable of such things.