耿耿

在申请国外大学的研究生院时，为了了解申请人的背景和素质，校方会要求申请人提供个人陈述等文字材料。国外大学非常看重这些材料，但许多中国学生的申请材料雷同乏味，很难体现申请人的特点和独特素质。相当多的PS没有被读完就被扔到了一边，原因主要是内容千篇一律。如果申请者被认为有抄袭的行为，整个申请就前功尽弃了。要克服雷同，就必须独立思考认真去写。其实，每一个申请者都是独一无二的，即使有着相同经历的两个人，在做相同事情时的体会及能够体现出来的自身的素质也是不同的，就像世界上没有完全相同的两片树叶一样。所以在写PS之前，一定要仔细回忆自己的经历，剖析自己的特点，从具体的事例中找到自己与众不同的地方及所具备的潜在素质，千万不要抄袭别人的文章。


这里的出发点是给大家提供一些PS写作模版作为语言的范例和指导，为尊重作者和避免抄袭，我删掉了PS中有个性的内容，只留下了可以借鉴的语言。希望大家能有所收获。加油：）

Computer Science

My desire to pursue a master’s degree in computer science stems from the knowledge that further education is vital to my hope of entering the Internet Technology industry. Like many young and ambitious people today, I am intrigued and excited by the impact it is having on our lives and our way of thinking. I want to be part of this process of change, but I realize to succeed in the IT industry, I need more tools—specifically more advanced CIS knowledge, the core technology of the IT industry.

Information System

A part-time job I took during my sophomore year inspired me to use the computer as a tool to facilitate the daily work and life of people. Although writing a customer database application sounds simple now, it was unknown to me, then. After many nights of hard work and toil, my first information system was born. When my colleagues were able to enter and collate data with a click, and be delighted with the results could print with the greatest ease, the sense of satisfaction I felt was immeasurable. Sine then I have been creating real-world high-tech solutions for people.

Engineering

A student on the dean’s list at the very best engineering university in China, I’m presently studying for a master’s degree in which I am focusing on control engineering. To purse my special interest to the very highest level, I wish to enter your graduate program to undertake doctoral study in the most stimulating and rewarding environment. Control engineering is a field that is in dire need of improvement in China, and this is the contribution I hope to make to my country upon my return.

Electrical Engineering

I wish to go abroad and learn newer and more progressive knowledge in this field. It is my great hope to enter your graduate program in Electrical Engineering and to receive financial assistance. I’m fully prepared to face the challenge of study abroad, and I have the ability to contribute much to your university. My enthusiasm for designing things and participating in a variety of activities has given me a great deal of practical experience and scientific reasoning skills. Moreover, my computer proficiency and past academic excellence gives me confidence that with hard work and persistence, I can face any challenge that is put before me.

[ 本帖最后由 耿耿 于 2007-6-27 15:46 编辑 ]

cincynia

帮助很大。
有借鉴加上个性描述就会简单很多（坐享其成不好）。

Nilme

恩，很有用，借鉴一下，谢啦

alansttearer

有没有Logistic的
老师当时申请的那份PS，肯定具牛！！！
很想一睹真容啊

wendywei

thanks so much