thief0007

自己写的东东，有很多不足之处，请高手指教，谢谢！
Through undergraduate studies, I have gained a full understanding of marketing. I obtained excellent academic grades in specialized studies (I was awarded the third class scholarships in the last academic year). I also have come into contact with accounting, law, management etc; however, I keenly aware that my current acquisition is far from enough for me to meet the needs of the rapidly developing economy, I am eager to pursue further studies.

My love of the management is thanks to my father, who owns a company for over twenty years. In daily life, I have been observing how my father does his business. It has awakened the “business” side of me. The real management I confronted is one of practice: conduct a new virtual company. With only capital, my five partners and I found the training company. As the team leader, I found it difficult to make a decision regarding which area to invest in. Another problem was some partners’ failure to follow the team's timetable. At the same time, I hoped to let our company survive in a highly competitive market. Despite all the market strategies and skills I have learned, leading the team and managing the company posed great challenges to me. Considering the real world, I realized that In the real, fast-paced business environment, nobody can afford to waste time on handling the problem of the team because by the time it is solved, the precious business opportunities may have already evaporated. So I am eager to know more knowledge of business.

thief0007

Gaining the Master Degree is not the only reason I want to attend your program. Much of what I know about the skills and experiences are extremely crucial in everyone’s work. Skills may include training gained from school or through jobs. My major is not Management, getting more relevant training is necessary to me, so I choose to be a manager's assistant during summer holiday. My work is to help the manager consummate the system of internal management. I also found some issues in their business. This program will better equip me to run a management team. I need learn about operations management, financial management and human resources, areas in which I had little experience. Besides giving me theoretical training, the Master education will strengthen the skills, such as communication in which I am lacking. Also, as business in this industry downsize, a greater emphasis is being placed on cross-functional abilities of executives. Though I have encountered many ideas through my studies as undergraduate and my experience in a company, I have had little contact with the operation side of business. The program would expose me to management and operating concepts with which I am unfamiliar. In short, I desire the holistic view of the business that the program would provide. Yet I realize I have only scratched the surface, and I would like to continue my education through your university's program.
        
In the past several years, my career goals have been defined and refined as my professional experiences have changed. I don’t want to become just an employee. I want to become an entrepreneur. And a successful entrepreneur needs to know everything of all the functional areas of business. Of course real-life experience may help me to succeed, but I don’t believe these can show me a prosperous business as fast as does learning on campus. Systematical learning in business, especially in management, will help me make better decisions later in my career. So a Master’s degree in management area is a must on my way to success.

daisyinbeijing

MA的个人陈述要这么长啊，，，，，，，，
我先飘走，帮你顶起来吧～～

thief0007

谢谢顶个