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TAST2 in most part of the world ,the volume of trafftic is growing at an alarming rate.in the form an assignment discuss about the main traffic problem in your country their cause and solution .

With the development of society and economy , it is inevitavble the volume of traffic is risen in each country of world .China is not also exception .This is a difficult problem towards all over the countries.Here I shall exppatiate on about a traffic prolbem and causes as well as possible solutions in China as follow.
In my opinion,there are three main problem in traffic.First,trafftic jam is heavy,especialy in rush hours and festrival and holiday,Secend, traffic acidents are occured at a high frequency,the rate of die and hurt are very high.Third,It is hard to park,parking is few and small.
The causes which produce traffic problem is in many aspects.On the first place,the pace of vehicle increasing is bigger than the pace of roods are build.On the other place,there is a trend that population flow from rural to urban,especialy to large and mediaum cities.but,means of transportation as well as construction of city has been not keep up with it.On the third place,people's sefaty and order motion is very weak.
The solutions of solve about traffic issue is a system engineering.To begin with,the purchasing and runuing of vecicles should be restricted at the form of prise or tax.Moreover,emogasis on the strength and rate in means of transportation as well as construction of city .Finally,,increase the eduction and inform about consciousness of safety and order at the masses.
The traffic problem is a big and not alone one in a country.It is concerned eoth with country's policies such as economy,population,whole project and development and so on of a city.To sum up,Ti is only ideal to complet solve it in a short peride time.It should be only step by step improved.