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雅思写作范文:电脑网络优缺点分析

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    [LV.9]以坛为家II

    发表于 2017-5-17 10:31 |显示全部楼层 | 阅读模式
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    本帖最后由 无忧雅思 于 2017-5-17 10:33 编辑

          由于电脑和网络的普及,现在有了越来越方便的学习和办公方式,雅思写作里也有出现过此类题目,下面我们就来看一下具体应该如何写作。

      题目:With computers and Internet, people can study and work without going to school or company. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?
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      参考范文:
      When it comes to the issue about the Internet, some people argue that their efficiency will be lower if they could study or work at home using the Internet, but I cannot agree with this opinion.
      Initially, using the Internet could serve as an efficient contributing factor to save more time for people. For those who live in a metropolis, it is common for them to spend two or even three hours on the way to schools or companies and back home. However, distance learning or working assists them to avoid the possible traffic congestion they may meet during the commuting time. Thus, because of the existence of Internet, learners or workers are potent to distribute more time to their study or work.
      Furthermore, it is beneficial to study or work at home because people could arrange their schedules more freely. Some students or workers have the higher efficiency during daytime while others may be more efficient at night. Studying or working at home enables individuals to allocate their time to different tasks according to their willingness. For example, for some art subjects, inspiration could be sparked better during a silent night, but not common working time.
      But the refuting voice may come from the opponents that working or studying alone at home may deprive people of the chance of communication; however, they oversimplify this situation. It is true that most employees or learners do tasks at home by themselves, but the fact is that they still have various methods to communication with peers or workmates, and it is the Internet that also provides them with convenient ways of keeping in touch with other people.
      In conclusion, people could benefit more if they adopt the way of working or learning by Internet, considering that they could save more time and have a free timetable.
      老师说:若想作文取高分,记得重点看每篇作文的论点论据,与表达方式,最终梳理文章精华之处,培养自身的严谨且具有逻辑性的思维模式。


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