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雅思写作高分技巧 让你的文章亮点不断

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    [LV.9]以坛为家II

    发表于 2018-5-14 10:27 |显示全部楼层 | 阅读模式
    雅思精准核心预测

       雅思写作想要取得高分并不容易,增加文章的亮点能够让你的作文更吸人眼球。下面是为大家带来的雅思写作高分技巧 让你的文章亮点不断,希望能够对大家有所帮助。

      雅思写作高分技巧一:避免使用语言弱的“be”动词

      1、在“here”或“there”开头的句子中,把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语

      例如:

      1) Weak:There is no opportunity for promotion.

      Revision:No opportunity for promotion exists.

      2) Weak:Here are the books you ordered.

      Revision:The books you ordered have arrived.

      2、表语转换为不同的修饰语

      例如:

      Weak:The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab.

      Revision:The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (转换为前置定语)

      Or:The landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. (转换为并列结构作后置定语)

      3、作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词

      例如:

      1) Weak:The team members are good players.

      Revision:The team members play well.

      2) Weak:One worker's plan is the elimination of tardiness.

      Revision:One worker's plan eliminates tardiness.

      雅思写作高分技巧二:表语转化为不同的修饰语

      很多烤鸭不明白什么时候用主动,什么被动!用错了,雅思写作分数自然不高!这样做,也是因为这个原因!

      例如:

      1、Weak:The organization has been supported by charity.

      Better:Charity has supported the organization.

      2、Weak:The biscuits were stacked on a plate.

      Better:Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate.

      雅思写作高分技巧三:使用具体的动词

      比较具体的描写会让文章看起来更有说服力,分数当然能提高啦!

      例如:

      1、Poor:My supervisor went past my desk.

      Better:My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk.

      2、Poor:She is a careful shopper.

      Better:She compares prices and quality.

      雅思写作高分技巧四:不要使用语言过长且累赘的词语

      写作不是用的词汇越高深就越高分,想提高成绩就要用词简单、生动。

      例如:

      1、Wordy:My little sister has a preference for chocolate milk.

      Improved:My little sister prefers chocolate milk.

      2、Wordy:We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your recommendations.

      Improved:We have received your letter and intended to follow your recommendation.

      3、Redundant:We had a serious crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.

      Improved:We had a crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.

      4、Redundant:My sister and I bought the same, identical dress in different stores.

      Improved:My sister and I bought the same dress in different stores.

      雅思写作高分技巧五:避免陈旧词语或难懂的专业术语

      雅思是一门语言考试,主要考察烤鸭们的语言运用能力,而写作关键点就在文章的表现力上!

      例如:

      1、Weak:They will not agree to his proposals in any shape or form.

      Improved:They will not agree to any of his proposals.

      2、Weak:I need her financial input before I can guesstimate our expenditures next fall.

      Improved:I need her financial figures before I can estimate our expenditures next fall.



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