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    [LV.9]以坛为家II

    发表于 2019-1-17 09:44 |显示全部楼层 | 阅读模式
    雅思精准核心预测

           先来看这样一个题目:The government should control the amount of violence in films and in television in order to decrease the number of violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

      解决这个题目首先要解决的问题就是审题。雅思写作过程中审题是非常重要但是常常被考生忽视的一个环节。我们在动笔写作之前最先要解决的一个问题就是搞清楚题目需要我们讨论的话题究竟是什么。如果只是了解个大概就开始动笔写,最终很容易因为偏题而无谓失分。看到这个话题,很多考生不假思索地就开始讨论政府是不是应该控制媒体中的暴力情节。然而,仔细一些我们就会发现,题目真正需要我们讨论的是通过控制媒体中的暴力是否可以减少暴力犯罪。

      看下面的范文:

      第一段:开头。

      背景(暴力情节在媒体上广为流传,并且被视作犯罪率增加的罪魁祸首)+话题(人们相信控制媒体上的暴力情节是社会稳定的前提条件)

      Violent scenes, widespread in the mass media, are considered to be the culprit of the increasing crime rate in many countries. Many people thus believe that effective restrictions on violence in TV programs and movies would be the premise of social security.

      第二段:让步

      论证媒体中的暴力情节的确是暴力犯罪的诱因。一方面,青少年会模仿这些暴力情节;另一方面,媒体展示犯罪过程中的很多细节信息,给有潜在犯罪倾向的人提供了方便。

      I agree that violence in the mass media is one of the inducements of crimes, primarily because of the ubiquity of the mass media. People, no matter young or old, rich or poor, are used to seeking for entertainment from the media. Watching TV in the evening and seeing a movie on the weekend have become a part of many people’s life. While being entertained by the violent scenes in the media, people are influenced by them even without being aware of it. Especially children and teenagers, not experienced enough to judge right from wrong, tend to imitate everything they are interested in. Constant contact with violence in the media will definitely make them more aggressive. On top of that, violent crimes have been a common subject of TV series and movies. Showing not only how a detective reveals the truth and how the police subdue the criminals, but also how the criminals plot about a certain crime and the entire process in detail, the mass media have satisfied the general public’s curiosity. At the same time, they have actually provided the audience with a vivid lesson about how to commit a violent crime.

      第三段:驳论

      控制媒体中的暴力情节只能在一定程度上减少暴力犯罪,因为导致暴力犯罪的根本原因不在于此。

      However, violence on media is, after all, an indirect cause of violent crimes, and the decrease in the crime rate requires much more than simply regulating the mass media. The fundamental reasons for the growing crime rate shall be rather complicated. Factors including the widening gap between the rich and the poor, the insufficient moral education for teenagers and the ineffective administration by local authorities would all contribute to social instability.

      第四段:结论

      To draw a conclusion, regulations on the violent scenes in the mass media will constrain people’s intention of committing the violent crime to a limited extent, and social security would be guaranteed provided with fewer social problems and effective government administration.

      以上就是小编为大家带来的全部内容,希望大家能对此类话题的作文有所了解,在以后的雅思写作考试中能够从容应对。



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