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舒服!我的英语水平很烂,写作也让我很痛,在论坛上看了这么多的高分作文就一个感觉,他们的文章流畅,思路清晰,用词其实都不是很难的,不想上辅导班的老师说的多用些7分词,8分词,最好是别人都不认识的.纯撤!!!

像我这种水平都能看懂,但就是写不出来,呵呵.

羡慕啊!顶一个!我写作的目标是6分.呵呵

我2月26号在郑州考,有通道中人没?

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, there has been arguments about

这句话感觉怪怪的,我就不会写出这句

语法是对的么

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大力支持本类贴的出现~~

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haha  

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ding

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CHINGLISH,

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不错不错,可以拿来背一下了

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Ding!

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语法错误很少,论点很好,论据充分,长短句相接,句型多样!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!![em03][em04][em07]

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看来评分主要是以文章的思想为主

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a beautiful essay

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对呀,别管人家是不是武断,人家能自圆其说,而且这本身也是说自己的论点。只要表达清楚,句子用的好那就是好作文。

受教育中。

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厉害呀,什么时候能达到这个水平就好了

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好贴!!!

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飘过……顶……

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其实我觉得要让读者在你的文章中看到的是你充满自信的观点,不管该观点的对错与否

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美味英语雅思范文-如何看待媒体
发布时间: 2005-6-27 10:32:06 被阅览数: 20 次 来源: 美味英语俱乐部
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Do the negative effects of some international media such as TV and magazine for example overweigh the positive effects?

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International media such as TV network and magazine always gives people in an information age mixed feelings. Like many other things, media is double-edged.
As primary channels of information, TV and magazine are convenient and economic sources of information for knowledge, entertainment, and shopping. Interestingly, sometimes the same piece of information varies considerably in its influences on audiences of different age. For example, in a TV commercial, a beautiful lady promotes a certain brand of perfume, which supposablely makes girls more attractive to boys. For potential grownup buyers, the ad is useful because they might be spending time searching for such products. We save time in shopping and making decision by making use of such advertisements. However, a teenage girl might get the wrong idea about the concept of perfume. She could get money from her parents to buy the advertised product. Worse yet, she might use the sex appeal strategy employed in the commercial to get ahead in the future. This is classic bad influence of media for young people’s overspending and inappropriate behaviors.
However, we find it very difficult to weight between merits and problems of media because they are often closely incorporated. For instance, violent scenes in movies are believed to be partially responsible for violence-related crimes, particularly those committed by young people. But on the contrary, such movies also give people a channel to release their anger, anxiety, and pressure. Moreover, these movies show us bad and evil as well as punishments for wrongdoings. Imagine we live in a world whose media is completely clean in such sense. The dark side of media does not disappear just because we do not talk about it. Nevertheless certain kinds of information such as porn are better kept away from young people.
In conclusion, media should not be seen simply as bad or good because we need to use information properly to the best of our ability. But for certain segments of viewers, we should be very careful with regard to the content of information and take measures to keep viewers from possible harmful influences of media.
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我9月也要考试了,看到这个作文哦,真的是我的大难题啊`~~~~~~~~~~~难啊~~~~~~~~`

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