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题目：The chart shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in the three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time.
作文：
The graph unfolds the pattern of further education in 3 periods for both female and male in Britain. Not only the trend of education, but also the comparison between men and women.
Consequently considering 3 stages, the result is concluded that each case presents some advance, except for men in part-time education. That exception indicates a fluctuation with a bottom of a little more than 800 thousand people in 1980. Moreover, the sums of men studying full time and part-time educated women obtained gradual raise of almost 200 and 350 respectively. To be excited, the number of women preferring full time study experienced a noticeable jump from 1970/71 to 1980/81 and followed by a flat rising to 200 thousand in the next in years.
Secondly, women’s education saw a better history of men. Firstly, in part-time educating situation, women won a continual moving on compared to the fluctuation for men. Secondary evidence is the number of full-educated people. Women turn the less number to the same amount successfully.
All in all, The bar chart illustrates both significantly obvious advanceof education with time and especially for women.
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