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Nowadays,young people tend to rush into independence.Many of them leave home to study or work while still in their teens.Discuss the advantages and disadvanges of this.
Nowadays,more and more teenagers leave home to study or work.As far as I am concerned,this tendency has both advantages and disadvantages.
On the one hand,young people leave home can train themselves to live.Many people lived with their parents from birth to adulthood so their parents could do most of things for them.A youngster who lives at home may not have learned to wash their own clothes,cook for themselves and care for themselves.However,people who leave home to study or work during their teens must do everything themselves in their daily life.
On the other hand,leaving home for independence too earlier,is also bad for their health.Since young people leave home at an early age there has nobody to teach them face to face how to deal with life's problems,such as becomes ill.When they become ill they do not know what food and medicine are necessary to take and nobody to cook for them.
Another disadvantage of leaveing home at an early age is that they may meet a bad people.Perhaps,they feel lonely,therefore more earily meet bad people without their parents'caution.However,if they lived at home their parents could stop their relationship with bad people and teach them what is good and what is bad.
In conclusion,young people have to think about both the advantage and disadvantage clearly before making the decision to leave home.And their parents also can help them decide what thinga are better for their life.Living alone can help them become independent,but in my opinion,living at home with their parents is a better way to become a good person.
