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求救~~老师---这样审题可以吗

求救~~老师---这样审题可以吗

请问老师~~这个作文题目这样写可以不可以?

题目:some people think it is better for children to go to boarding schools ,while others think that they should go to day shools and stay with their parents.

discuss these arguments and express your own opinion

结构是这样的:

一,开头,描述两种观点.

二,写关于go to day shools 的优点.

三,写关于go to boarding schools 的优点.

四,写自己的观点,支持go to boarding schools ,写两点关于go to day shools 的缺点.

thank you very much

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个人不推荐这样写,还是选一个集中攻击,不要两边都写。应该绝对加大你第四部分的比例!

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dicuss类的好象一边到比较好,而且容易写好

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discuss型的文章就是要从两方面加以论述,两段都是详写段,最后一段阐述自己的观点! 是吧,何老!
An individual human existence should be like a river, small at first, narrowly contained within its banks, and rushing passionately past boulders and over waterfalls.

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